Martial Arts: Yaoyue Sent Me, Undercover Jin Yiwei

Your book is neither good nor bad. If you write a systematic article, you should write it well. How can you be so cowardly if you have a systematic article? When writing martial arts articles, write them well. The system will brag about your martial arts skills for a while! Do you have a split personality? System writing does not require logic, it only needs to be powerful. The great martial arts writers serve the country and the people. Even if they do not serve the country and the people, they can live a happy life. When I look at your writing, I will say how powerful the system is, but it is restricted by the martial arts characters. The martial arts are so carefree, but it is restricted by the system's choice! Take a good look at what you wrote. What is the complete meaning of it?

There are two problems with this book so far. 1. The main character wants to marry Yao Yue, who is his master. Yao Yue is difficult to get. In addition, the status of the master is even more difficult, which makes the progress of the protagonist's emotional line extremely slow. Because other women do not dare to move unless he wins Yao Yue. 2. The main plot problem: What has the protagonist been doing? There is no clear goal.

Where is the eldest son of Yihua Palace, Jin Yiwei, undercover? It's just a leakage of electricity in the game helmet and a fantasy before death.

See Chapter 3. . . It is known that the protagonist's adult soul was transformed into a baby, and he has the understanding of an adult since he was a child. The baby moves to the Flower Palace at the beginning, has a top martial arts master, and has a systematic golden finger. . . Question: In this case, the 22-year-old protagonist is just an acquired peak. What kind of top-notch god-defying thing is this? Isn't a tortoise like Di Shitian better in terms of longevity than the protagonist? Even if you give Emperor Shaktian these golden fingers at the age of 22, he will not be so virtuous.

The shape of the full moon scimitar is not very good, it feels ugly

You are just a yandere, you have a system, and you are kaleidoscope the first time, why should you be afraid of a yandere? Still afraid of being knifed? If you don't have the strength to be afraid, understand, but if you have the strength to be afraid, you are just a coward. If you are bolder, you can just sit back and watch these women fight. If you are a little more aggressive, you will be on the home plate in reality. There is no need to be afraid of a yandere if she has the strength. If you hold her down while she is sick, she will be nothing but a yandere. Kitchen knife you? After you're tied up and hung up, the other women will kill you, why do you still worry about this and that? Hatchet other women? Stop and finish. You have strength, others regard you as the only one, and you regard others as one-third. How much of a coward do you have to be to be cowardly?

I would like to ask, with Yao Yue's character, would he let his disciples go undercover in Jinyiwei?

Stop fucking with me. Damn it, I really don't have any money.

This is the most aggrieved, most ****, most useless god-killer.

The author ran away after writing this book, so he had no choice but to risk his life. Please forgive me.

You broke through Xiantian from the very beginning. You wrote 8.44 Million words from Xiantian to Grandmaster. You are so awesome.

The author's routine is probably that after the protagonist does something, the follow-up description will be about 35 chapters, how this force is shocked, how that force is afraid, the same routine has been written for nearly ** chapters, you don't call it Shuiwen, it's called Haiwen

An ability appeared out of nowhere, and he used such an awesome ability to do something as extreme as a loser. Was the author really hit too hard? !

Why is Ying Zheng's son's surname Qin?

It's been 17 years and it's still being updated now. It's so cruel.

Author What is a mountain god? Do you understand what the mountain god is writing novels? ! Although the mountain god is a minor god, he is also a god. What kind of god is the mountain god you write about in your book? ! Just like any other human being, write something.

I just finished reading it, and I think it's okay, but the author's writing style is obviously not from Feilu. After reading the same Naruto articles for a long time, this one is still good. At least I can't guess the follow-up. I don't know why the data is so low.

I only saw fatality, not protection, only parasitism, no symbiosis.

Author, since there are gods in this world, let the four gods of Armor, Spirit Cavalry, Holy Blade, and Extreme Fox come out at the end and let the knights of this world and the knights summoned by the protagonist see them, and let them also be in their strongest form.

How many of you have you seen? There is a kind of maternal love called Yan Mu, a kind of father's love called Ghost Father, a kind of brother calling sister called Yuan Zhi Kong, a kind of sister calling brother sister Zhi, a kind of doctor calling nurse night shift ward, a kind of Bible called Dark Bible, a kind of prison called Prison Battleship, and a kind of moon called "Sister Warship". Faceless Moon, there is a kind of sky called Autumn Sky, there is a kind of school called Desire School, there is a kind of office called Underwear Office, there is a kind of night called Harvest Night, there is a kind of subway called Chihan Train, there is a kind of curiosity called Moment of Enchantment, there is a magical girl called Xiao Ai, there is an invasion called Black Beast, there is There is a kind of rebellion called Silver Dragon Dawn, there is a kind of education called personal teaching, there is a kind of armor called Armored Knight, there is a kind of angel called Demon Realm Angel, there is a kind of campus love called Sun on Campus, there is a kind of loyalty called Ji Knight, there is a kind of battle called the battle of light and shadow, there is a kind of young tooth called Chu Dog, there is a kind of taxi called Midnight Taxi, there is a kind of revenge called otaku.

There is no need to waste money after reading Chapter 82

When I watched Naruto before I think Minato is so handsome and strong

There is no need to reject all advertisements and the like. After all, the celebrity does not have many representative advertisements.

Seven: The end of Kamen Rider has arrived.

How white this wash makes the people in the courtyard! Not to mention that the courtyard is a den of beasts, Yi Zhonghai embezzling the money sent by He Daqing to Shazhu was filmed in the TV series. This wash is so white.

Author, are you okay with blatantly rolling your eyes like this in the early stage?

What is level 23 and level 30?

The author practiced the sword technique to ward off evil spirits

There were more than 600 pictures at the beginning, I thought I had made a mistake

I don't want to say anything, I hate dark literature