Online Game: I Created a Character to Kill the Goddess, Then Slaughtered the Greedy Village Chief from the Start

If you finish writing it, start it again. Don't use first person. Most people don't like first person novels.

Your first-person perspective feels very middle-class.

Looks pretty good, come on

What was originally good was ruined because of the first person.

I thought it was the "gan"

Meixiao, pinchmei. Doesn't the protagonist in the author's writing have other expressions? Also, the protagonist is described as a kind of bastard, so emotionless.