After being reborn, Qin Yan landed in the Empire Age ahead of schedule and became the first lord.
And he got the god-level talent 'The Chosen One', so he was so lucky.
As a result, Qin Yan worked step by step to seize the opportunity and build the strongest tribe.
Build Elf Forest, Dragon Altar, and Mage Guild.
From tribe to empire.
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An architectural novel about an online game from another world, the introduction is loveless, but you can read the text! Absolutely cool article!
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
The whole plot is to keep changing maps, and then keep fighting, claiming to be a lord, but no development can be seen at all. From the part I watched, I can see a meaning: anyway, if you have the heart of a lord, loyalty is not a problem, the protagonist will fight to the death, attack the city and conquer the territory, and then the enemy will be crazy and smart, surrender easily, and finally, wow, the protagonist is so awesome! ! ! In fact, I think that instead of writing about a lot of armies of different races mixed together, it is better to write about only one or two races, such as humans and elves. From your novel, I don't see that you have the ability to control so many legions and races. It is better to just write about a few legions. One or two races, clear and clear, all developed around the territory, expanding little by little, is better than you. Go to a place, open a map, add a race, and introduce it. Those who know it will think that your novel has no center and no direction. I don't know that you are just trying to count the words. **
"My Wild Tribe" is pretty good
There is a lot of nonsense every day about past lives and past lives.
I am shocked all day long. I am still so ignorant after being reborn. I am promising... I am still upstream. I am hopeless.
This setting feels like the experience of being reincarnated as a slime is inexplicably similar to the feeling of being given a name by Rimuru.
To kill Luffy, you must kill him with one move
**One-third of each chapter emphasizes the benefits of logging in early and laments that you are equidistant in advance. The word count is not that low, right?
Can you not write about your past life? Don't just lament about the Chosen Talent. I just read five chapters. In one chapter, the description of the protagonist's recollection of the past life accounts for a large part. There are seven or eight descriptions of the Chosen Talent. It's very long-winded. The protagonist always lives in memories and emotions. You can't let the protagonist do what a lord should do in a down-to-earth manner. It's useless to always describe with memories and emotions.
It took less than 1 day from the discovery of the mithril vein to the mining of 30%. How long can the entire vein be mined? 1 Day, 2 days. Will the buildings used to protect the veins be useful after the mining is completed?
?? Logging in Feilu in advance means that there will never be other players. It's not like you don't know Feilu's urine properties. Let's break up. There's nothing interesting to see.
Talking to myself and listing attributes too much
The writing is okay, I finished reading it in one day, but to learn from Yashan Dragon God, you have to write faster. I jumped over from that one. He was fattened by me once a day. I hope his other one will not die.
Chapter 19, first sentence: "I'll deal with you when I come back?" What does that mean?
What about my reincarnation as a slime?
610,000 Reward, 20,000 flowers, a monthly pass, cheating
Are they promoting mass graves in the barren mountains and ridges? A total of 100,000 protagonists can be purchased for 99,000? . And the first one? ? How many zz do you think there are in the world? ? No one bought the new VR game. There is no advance news from those rich countries? ? ?
The whole plot is to keep changing maps, and then keep fighting, claiming to be a lord, but no development can be seen at all. From the part I watched, I can see a meaning: anyway, if you have the heart of a lord, loyalty is not a problem, the protagonist will fight to the death, attack the city and conquer the territory, and then the enemy will be crazy and smart, surrender easily, and finally, wow, the protagonist is so awesome! ! ! In fact, I think that instead of writing about a lot of armies of different races mixed together, it is better to write about only one or two races, such as humans and elves. From your novel, I don't see that you have the ability to control so many legions and races. It is better to just write about a few legions. One or two races, clear and clear, all developed around the territory, expanding little by little, is better than you. Go to a place, open a map, add a race, and introduce it. Those who know it will think that your novel has no center and no direction. I don't know that you are just trying to count the words. **
"My Wild Tribe" is pretty good
There is a lot of nonsense every day about past lives and past lives.
I am shocked all day long. I am still so ignorant after being reborn. I am promising... I am still upstream. I am hopeless.
This setting feels like the experience of being reincarnated as a slime is inexplicably similar to the feeling of being given a name by Rimuru.
To kill Luffy, you must kill him with one move
**One-third of each chapter emphasizes the benefits of logging in early and laments that you are equidistant in advance. The word count is not that low, right?
Can you not write about your past life? Don't just lament about the Chosen Talent. I just read five chapters. In one chapter, the description of the protagonist's recollection of the past life accounts for a large part. There are seven or eight descriptions of the Chosen Talent. It's very long-winded. The protagonist always lives in memories and emotions. You can't let the protagonist do what a lord should do in a down-to-earth manner. It's useless to always describe with memories and emotions.
It took less than 1 day from the discovery of the mithril vein to the mining of 30%. How long can the entire vein be mined? 1 Day, 2 days. Will the buildings used to protect the veins be useful after the mining is completed?
?? Logging in Feilu in advance means that there will never be other players. It's not like you don't know Feilu's urine properties. Let's break up. There's nothing interesting to see.
Talking to myself and listing attributes too much
The writing is okay, I finished reading it in one day, but to learn from Yashan Dragon God, you have to write faster. I jumped over from that one. He was fattened by me once a day. I hope his other one will not die.
Chapter 19, first sentence: "I'll deal with you when I come back?" What does that mean?
What about my reincarnation as a slime?
610,000 Reward, 20,000 flowers, a monthly pass, cheating
Are they promoting mass graves in the barren mountains and ridges? A total of 100,000 protagonists can be purchased for 99,000? . And the first one? ? How many zz do you think there are in the world? ? No one bought the new VR game. There is no advance news from those rich countries? ? ?
You have too many typos, right?