Back to Field: The Divine and Demonic Post Station

The writing is messy, let alone hiring someone to write it for you. If you write two books in one book, wouldn't it be better to just start one?

Author, your IQ is worrying! It's time to renew! Let's not talk about other things, just the method of upgrading the station is really sick! Scary? Author, you don't take the government seriously! It's okay for you to be a scary inn. The government probably won't care about you for the time being. At most, it will just block the news. After all, there is no harm. But what if you come to scare people and scare them to death? What to do if it causes social panic? The government will definitely reward you with a small mushroom! Smooth you out! You really think the government is just a decoration! Your station is awesome, isn't it? Can you withstand a nuclear bomb?

It can be said that the first 379 chapters are quite well written, with good ideas, and the overall concept is also very rigorous. The plot is quite compact, which is considered outstanding in Feilu. However, the following chapters are obviously ghostwritten. After the chapter "The God and Demon Station Disappears", the overall level dropped by more than ten levels in an instant, and the previous chapters were full of praise. It was so full of character that it disappeared in an instant, and the viewers were extremely embarrassed. It can be said that if Feilu had hired a professional ghostwriter to study the writing style and content of the first half before creating it, I believe that this book would definitely be regarded as an outstanding one among fan fictions, instead of being like this now, which is so frustrating to watch.

The plot collapses when the protagonist disappears from the inn and returns

This protagonist is a pretender. He wants to scare the show crew into upgrading, but at the same time he doesn't want anyone to bother him. What are you pretending to do? Why don't you show off to the villagers? Either treat them equally or stop pretending. He is taking advantage of others, but he is also keeping his life away. If he meets someone who is better than you, he will definitely kill you.

Oh my God! I have gone through untold hardships, overcame numerous difficulties, devoted myself to practicing Taoism for more than 30 years, and finally gained a glimpse of the way of heaven and formed the golden elixir! Entering the coveted golden elixir avenue! Why did you destroy my Dantian and shatter my Golden Dan! "Pah! The little nurse next to me patted me and said, "Stop talking so much! Isn't it just a gallstone? As for that? In the obstetrics and gynecology department on the second floor, there is a girl with extraordinary beauty who became a Nascent Soul at the age of 16! Why don't you let us take it as usual? So there are several distraction periods in the mental hospital next door, there is an out-of-body state in the underground morgue, and there are two integration periods in the hotel opposite. No, there is a new Mahayana master on the second floor who has just survived the thunder tribulation~

I don't know how to say you are a good author. It has been uploaded so widely on the Internet and people have died. I am speechless if the country doesn't care whether it will block it or not. No matter how strong the program team is, it cannot be stronger than the national strength. Moreover, it is a live broadcast. Even if the program team does not call the police, the police will go straight to the purpose of investigation. Then if the blockade is serious, the village will be sealed. The program team will also seal it, and people who have been in contact with it will ask questions. In a word, don't ignore the strength of a country. The strength of a country is still very scary.

Some people say that the plot of Mirage is off-topic, and indeed it is. I want to try to see if I can write something new, and if I can stop repeating it. I try to make it more engaging, but the effect may not be very good. You can give me your opinions, what do you like, how do you want the author to write it, and I will adopt it as appropriate.

After 385 photos, it was over. It was messy. I talked to Yuan freely and dared to hold hands. I changed my personal settings. The most important thing was that it was messy at the end. I couldn't understand a very good subject matter and it was ruined. I'm really convinced. This is my first comment. I'll say it in advance next time I write it. I'll save myself buying more chapters. Damn it.

There is something wrong with this chapter. Ask the protagonist to appear. If he doesn't appear, Uncle Jiu will not be summoned. You will summon Uncle Jiu to speak out of his body. . . . . Don't you just want to ask where the Shengui Station went?