
The Myriad Worlds Mercenary System, Starting from Naruto
从火影开始的万界佣兵系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.3M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1kChapters
18.2MReads
408.8kFlowers
10.0Score
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To be honest, I quite liked this book. But what I can't accept is that the author has obviously made the protagonist so powerful that killing super-shadow-level dead bodies with shadow-level strength is as easy as chopping melons and vegetables. Why do you have to arrange a scene where a pirate is beaten by a demon and tortures the protagonist? What you wrote is obviously invincible! In this case, even if the protagonist is not as powerful as the devil, shouldn't he still fight to the next level? But look at you, being insulted, beaten away, vomiting blood, running away... This is completely inconsistent with the character you created! What kind of protagonist is he if he can't push him all the way and defeat everyone he refuses to accept? If only it were in reality, this is a novel! Don't you, the author, have the final say on winning or losing? By arranging such a plot, aren't you trying to seduce readers?
I don't know when it started, but now when writing Naruto novels, the protagonist must follow Tsunade's shameless and troublesome character, in order to accept the people around her
I want to know, if the family encounters a rebellious boy, what will happen if Shikamaru and Choji grow crookedly? Shikamaru only knows how to eat, but would it be interesting if Choji uses his brain to maintain his body shape?
What kind of thing is written about martial arts? The dialogue is purely modern. The little dragon girl will say that your brain is crazy? What the hell?
This system is extremely intelligent. It can criticize the protagonist and call itself "what am I doing!" Weigh it yourself
Author, if you want to write a love story, can't you wait until the protagonist is older? Why are you falling deeply in love with Xiao Longnu at the age of four or five? I'm afraid there's something wrong with the sperm's brain. It doesn't have all the functions and looks awkward. It's really poisonous.
When criticizing, consider the era and background in which the author wrote the book, what themes and themes are popular, and what writing methods are popular. Use the current perspective of cool writing to judge previous books? Your official authority is so great
I didn't see anything else, just a comparison between the author and the system where they kept talking nonsense.
Abuse Guangdong Atez's post, attitude towards Huadu Ford joint venture, Gothic body, ancient iron body, responsible escort, this is not in harmony with the soothing, especially fat, retro style, yes, yes, yes
The author here is on par with the Six Paths of Hokage in cultivating immortals. You can think of Dora, which is worse than the immortal cultivators in the legend of mortals cultivating immortals. Only immortals can explode into stars (possibly)