Harry Potter: I Own the Proficiency System

How many levels is a magic wand superior to the Pangu Ax?

I thought it was a surprise, but I didn't expect it to be a shock. I got first blood before entering school. How old is the protagonist? 10 Years old? 12 Years old?

Written by that stupid author! It was confusing from the beginning! Did you know it was Harry Potter before you even received the letter? I started fantasizing about punching Lao Deng and kicking Lao Fu! ! And then he slept with a girl when he was just 10 years old? ? Fei Lu's novels are getting more and more exciting!

Is this continued by a primary school student? I'm afraid it's difficult to pass the homework with these words and sentences! ? How about asking a junior high school student to check it out?

A thoroughbred novel in Harry Potter's sheep's clothing, forcibly changing the character's personality and age in order to allow the protagonist to have a harem, and what's more, his eleven-year-old kid's wand is more powerful than Pangu's axe? Author, how dare you think that?

How many times more advanced than Pangu Ax? I'm exaggerating too much. First of all, in terms of world level, Prehistoric World is hundreds of times more advanced than Harry Potter World. The reason I say this is because the various settings of Prehistoric World are perfect and completely become a system, but what about Harry Potter? Just find any book that describes the wizarding world, and it will be dozens or hundreds of times better than the Harry Potter world. And what is the concept of Pangu Ax? It's really like the Pangu Ax, which is even several times stronger. The fluctuations it emits are enough to shatter the world of Harry Potter. The wizards in the Harry Potter world are so weak that I even doubt that ordinary people can kill them with a sneak attack with a gun. Don't make it too obvious to trick the protagonist. It can't be written that you get a perfect wand that can even be transformed at will and has unlimited potential.

I haven't been acting for three years and you still invest in him to play the leading role. Is it because the boss is mentally ill?

But why do you have so many vertical bars in your chapter? Can you go?

I feel like the shelf is too high, and I feel like I want to pretend but I can't figure it out.

The author didn't listen to the advice, he didn't correct a bunch of typos, and there were a bunch of vertical lines that he didn't know what he was doing. No wonder the data is poor.

What the hell, don't you feel uncomfortable looking at a bunch of parallel bars?

For me, a book reader, your parallel bars are so uncomfortable.

There are a lot of prefaces that don't match the afterwords, and there are also a lot of illogical plots in the content. I'm really speechless.

Carlos looked at his exclusive weapon and knew that it was a weapon that at least surpassed the Pangu ax that created the world by several levels in the myths and legends of the celestial dynasty. Do you know how powerful Pangu's weapon was? Can yours create something new? And is this just a low-level magical world of yours? Do all lower worlds have such powerful weapons?

The author is suitable for writing pornographic books. This book is either among X or on the road to X

To be honest, the corrupt country has experienced many religious reforms. Your form is too dazzling. How could you escape the joint strangulation of Catholics and Protestants? During the witch hunt, this family should be taken down to set an example.

After five or six years of writing, this is all? ? It would be better to reopen it! !

I'm speechless, what I wrote is bird shit, there are so many typos, the preface doesn't match the postscript.

Bad review, there are typos and vertical lines everywhere, and there are also missing words in some places.

The writing is so messy, I feel like the author is not clear-headed and just writes whatever comes to mind and cannot understand it! !

Why are they all accepting women? It feels like the author is a stinky loser who has never seen a woman before! Are you having sex here?

Doesn't the protagonist know that this is the world of Harry Potter? Why do you feel like he doesn't even know basic things? ?

I like the subject matter very much, but the writing style makes it uncomfortable to read. Alas: (It's a pity

There are so many typos and grammatical errors that it's uncomfortable to watch.

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding me.

No, no, no, you foreign-loving* thing, hurry up

All kinds of inexplicable symbols make the listening experience extremely poor. No wonder I haven't read it before.

Can a shop give out 500,000 galleons? How about playing? Galleons are not that easy to get in this world, especially gold. In a popular store, you would have to save 500,000 galleons for almost a century. A pure-blood family with a lot of property and a yearly income of less than 200,000 galleons is as high as the sky.

What's the point of complaining about those two IIs? Let's take a look at II in just a few lines.

The identity of the pig's trotter is really embarrassing. It's like he's afraid that others won't know that the pig's trotter is Lucifer. It's clearly written about Harry Potter, but it seems like a religious text.