Pokemon: The Devilish Breeder

… This is not considered a novel, just a composition.

This third perspective looks so uncomfortable Chapter 3 abandoned

Are you going to write purely in vernacular this time?

I think this book is pretty good

The darkening of the main character is a bit scary, so I won't watch it. If you watch it and it's not scary, you probably have a lot of courage or lack of imagination.

The story is quite good, I can practice my writing

It's not like writing a novel, it's like listening to a story, and it's also very well written.

It's been ** years, why do people still use the first person in this book and still give detailed accounts?

I feel that you are not suitable for writing Pokémon, but suitable for writing horror novels.