Academy: The Dying Will Flame

I felt relieved when I saw a lot of trolls in the comment area.

I seem to have scolded you before. I scolded you again. What you wrote was a hammer.

Good water, full of water**, I was confused after reading several chapters, and I couldn't understand many parts at all

It would be better to write a story about a little hero who gets the power of a tutor and travels back in time.

I will like comments that cause discomfort to the author

When I looked at the title of the book, I thought it was My World in the World, Personality Death Flame. I clicked in and took a look, but it turned out to be super confusing. The whole novel was just a hodgepodge!

The idea clearly failed. When I first saw the title of the book, My Hero Academia: Flame of Death, I thought it was about the character of Death, but I was confused when I read the manga. Ahem, the author recommends that you re-open a new book and not come to Mixed World.

What the hell is this beginning? Self-pleasure?

Good subject matter, but the text is not good and ruined. I suggest you learn more about how to write.

Brother, why are you returning to Earth?