The Qin Empire: The Formless Quicksand

Why does it have to have a female protagonist? Can't we live without a female protagonist?

Author, in my opinion, the best development direction for your book is dark literature. Ruthlessness is the biggest charm of the protagonist, and unscrupulous means is the label of the protagonist. In terms of emotional drama, you'd better write it as sadomasochism, and write about the protagonist's various grievances and hatreds with these women in order to practice killing swordsmanship. Do you know why the anime Qin Shimingyue has been popular for so many years? Because this anime highlights people's emotional helplessness and pursuit of power during the Warring States Period, the various emotional lines in it are one of the greatest charms of this anime, but the bloody cruelty of troubled times and the thoughts and martial arts of various schools of thought are the soul of this anime. Fei Luli's fan fiction is all harem fiction. You might as well try the direction of dark fiction. Authors, you should understand that if you want to attract readers' attention, it is best to be original and unique. Dark fiction is a very popular subject in online writing.

The writing is inexplicable, 1. Although he has martial arts, he begs for travel expenses to go to Qin. 2. He obviously wanted to avoid the war, but he was inexplicably involved in South Korea. 3. At first, he said he would not work for careerists, but inexplicably ended up in Han Fei's camp. 4. The protagonist's character is not distinctive enough, and he does not have the insights and perspectives of a time traveler that transcends the times. 5. The protagonist's goal is unclear, why must he join the quicksand and kneel and lick Han Fei. The purpose of establishing an organization like Assassin's Creed or Butian Pavilion is not higher or nobler than Liusha's purpose. 6. If the protagonist wants to develop his power, he should surround the city with the countryside instead of causing trouble in the city.

Author, do you agree? I want to add a skirt, let's discuss it by adding a skirt

Author, does this novel have a harem? I hope it has a single female protagonist.

The cake is so big. Do they know what the cake is?

The author is using mystical tricks to cut down the protagonist like Nie!

Information about the wooden sword and sword skills will be explained after Chapter 10 is released. Then you can just go to the related work to read it.

Come on come on. . Talk. . What kind of swordsmanship does the protagonist use? . Or is there any talk about exercises or something like that?

And at this point in time. . Tian said her mother. . Just skipped it. ??