Fantasy: I Became an Enhancement Fruit

If you don't write about a fantasy city, then write about a fantasy city, or just write about a fantasy otherworld!!! Your writing style is not strong to begin with, but you still dare to write about fantasy cities and fantasy otherworlds!!! Who gave you the courage Liang Jingru??

The creativity is great, but the writing is not very good.

Commentary on Chapter 11: The Birth of a Campus Madman (2 updates, please collect flowers) in Wu Yazi's "The Fantasy I Became the Enhanced Fruit".

Not having a formal relationship in less than 100 chapters is normal for some authors who only read the main text, but readers of Feilu always want to add more meat!!

Fig is a piece of waste material and should be discarded directly.

Only if Fei Lu Shuangwen writes well will his grades be very good. Any dissatisfaction will affect his grades. Not to mention the issue about the heroine. When reading novels, you put yourself into it. Your wife takes off her clothes in front of others. If you think there's nothing wrong, then you're destined not to be popular.

Author, you wrote that I am almost sick with embarrassment. Is it really better to forcefully pretend than to slap someone in the face? If you forcefully slap someone in the face on something that was clearly done or solved directly, it is very disharmonious and makes it look like pig's feet are the same as a**. This needs to be improved.

Forcibly pretending is the most embarrassing thing. ****

The author, since he has strengthened the techniques of heaven level and god level, why not strengthen a rag doll to become a puppet? There is at least one guardian

It's boring to just go through time and run in both directions.