The All-Rounder Boy

The introduction talks about an ordinary boy. How can an ordinary boy still have a magical eye? How can he still be ordinary if he has a magical eye?

Messy and unclear

The original character design of Shui Yaoguang seemed quite good, but my impression dropped sharply around 74

The snow in the Arctic is not dead, I feel uneasy,

I haven't even finished the first chapter, what the hell?

I don't even know what you wrote

What a fucking thing, just scribbling a few words... O>_<o? ...?

It's too confusing and illogical at all. Just write whatever you want.

And what about Murong? One arm was crippled and there was no back?

Such a frustrating beginning of the novel and a silly plot. Such a good novel title was wasted.