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You have the ability to teach Bulma to tens of thousands of people in six years, you are really bragging. Human beings don't have much potential at all. No matter how great you are, how great can you be? Do you see any human beings in the later period?

? ? Just the protagonist's 3 million combat power defeated Frieza with 120 million combat power? Have you seen Dragon Ball? ? I'm afraid you're not kidding me

Is the author kidding me? He could have killed Frieza before, but he let him go for plot reasons. That's it. He only had 800,000 combat power after one year. Didn't you know that in Super, Frieza can compete with Super Blue after four months of training?

Frieza's combat power of more than 100 million was scared away by the protagonist's combat power of 3 million. Are you serious?

Chapter 20: Bogaru is hungry again [1 update] Chapter 20 of "I am Zero's biological father" written by an unknown sister.

Author, you said that every slave of a god is more powerful than the god, so who is stronger than the king, the bodyguards around him, or the great priest?

Strictly speaking, the author actually adheres to the creative flow, adding original plots that he understands, downplaying the emotional description, and passing it by in one stroke. In fact, it can be written very well. After all, judging from Book Review 5, the emotional drama written by the author is a bit overwhelming for readers. First of all, this is not a book recommendation. I don't know if the author has read Xianwu: Lawless. This book is also written by Fei Lu. This book also follows the creation style, but it does not follow the plot, but adds many personal original plots, but it does not make people feel inconsistent. The plot is well handled. There is no depth to the emotional route, only a few words are used to describe it. Your book is very similar to that one in terms of creativity. The author can take a look at it and change his thinking. After all, writing a book is also for life. Being able to write better and have more people read it is the key. The above is just my personal opinion, I hope the author will write better and better

Mmp, what makes me not want to order? It's the one that I ate for half the day when I went to reality. It was so refreshing and I just lost half of it and I was speechless.

You have to ask the system for everything, and you don't use any brains at all? I can't even feel the improvement in strength, and I still ask where the system has been improved and what the hell is that?

关于难民所著《三国：开局签到得了个武则天》 第四十章 曹操的哀叹 章节点评。

Comments on Chapter 5 of "Siheyuan: The Beginning Makes Sha Zhu and Qin Huairu Fall Out" written by Super Pirate: Sha Zhu and Qin Huairu break up their relationship, and Qin Huairu commits suicide by hitting the wall.