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I must not be a novice. It is rare for the author to write so much, so he just talks about some insights from reading the book. "The system is conscious" is a particularly annoying setting. The author's name is Ye Mingyu, and the protagonist in the book is Ye Meng. At the beginning, the author's system and the protagonist's questions and answers? Readers read novels, not the author for his own pleasure. You can add your inner subjective thoughts into the book, but it is recommended not to end the story yourself. Leave aside the author's presence in the book and don't let the characters play out. The first three chapters are very important for your grades. After reading your other two books, I feel that the problems are the same. Also, the start is very bland. Don't go into details about settings and introductions. Even if Long Aotian is a little more cheerful, it's better if the start can attract people. For example, in the first chapter, you are in danger just after traveling through time, and you are saved by a system plug-in at the end of the chapter. This is the cool point of a comprehensive comic. It is best to give people the beginning of the story in the first chapter, rather than chatting with the system or a certain character for a long time at the beginning. Sorry if it's not easy to say, I hope it will be helpful to start a new book.
Damn it, you mortal immortal is equal to the prehistoric saint, you are so awesome
When the original protagonist loses the beautification of the original author, it always feels like these original protagonists are going to stab you later.
1Fantasy Crystal
2Copy abilities
3 main gods
4 lucky gems
5 Universal Summoner
6 pieces of random system
7 Heart of the Demonic God
80,000 Realm Emperor Lotus
9 infinite magic circle
10 god level charm
11…………read readers' thoughts
前后差距太大,最近写的明说了就是一坨使,这t。m很难让人相信不是代写
Have you not watched the protagonist's time travel and soul ferry? Don't even know the function of Zhao Li's blood
Finally, it was decided that the comic book worlds of Fairy Tail, Black Clover and The Prisoner of Food will be newly written, and the old books will be continued with the follow-up of the magic teacher.
我有系统,回复1给你们看一看,回复6给你们一人一个
Why is Guoman safe and sound?
The new story content mainly focuses on Mondstadt, Liyue and Daozhi, invitations from girls and legendary missions.
希望这不是一本后宫种马文
I use two words to describe the protagonist you wrote, trash, the law of the great road versus the law of heaven, ** versus 10
Hello everyone
I am a transcendent person from the universe, and now I am providing 800 time-travel opportunities for free! Just reply 666 to get a free time travel opportunity and system, the quantity is limited, first come first served! Beauty, eternal life, power, dreams, thousands of worlds, reaching the pinnacle of life, just this time! What are you waiting for! ?
Also: We provide round trip service, remember to give it a good review ^3^
Get a free time travel opportunity and system, the quantity is limited, first come first served! Beauty, eternal life, rights, dreams, three thousand worlds, reaching the pinnacle of life, just this time! What are you waiting for! ?
Also: We provide round trip service, remember to give it a good review ^3^
The main world is well written and has a lot of foreshadowing, but author, you forgot about the Council of Mists. . .
Get bail, tell the truth, make headlines, liar, cheat on subscriptions
It doesn't matter what you say about skills. In fact, internal strength is not as exaggerated as flying over walls and walls. But how can you control the weather when playing Red Alert? When fighting, do you still have to shout to the sky to borrow thunder to kill the opponent?
Speaking of which, do you want to learn a wave of impermanence and unparalleled ancient and modern? Anyway, there is a system, and you can get whatever you want.
海军只有卡普才有霸王色霸气战国是没有的****作者
秦始皇活了有800年吗?我记得他死的时候也才四十多岁吧,到你这简介特么直接800年?
The data of an exile is hundreds of billions, and there are also two training systems, which are mainly based on games, and there are also prehistoric elements. It's a hodgepodge.
唉。。不是母女一起收。。。天龙八部母女多。
Gao Shenghan? ? ? ? ? ? GI Joe: Thunderbolt? ? ? ? ? ? Let me guess the protagonist's name.
Regarding Chapter 98 of "Siheyuan: Full-level Fortune Telling at the Beginning" written by Call Me Xianggong, go to bed early to save electricity! Please subscribeChapter review.
About the rise of Zi Da, "TikTok's God-level Male God" Chapter 51 Lin Fan posted on Weibo to write a book [3/5, please give me flowers and review votes! ] Chapter review.
About "The Myth of the Heavens Arrive" written by Chou Jue Chapter 3 The Myth Arrives! (Please collect and ask for flowers) Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 15 of "American Comics: The Man Who Came Out of the Doomsday" written by Red Little Man. The End Means the Beginning and the End.
Chapter 39 hasn't been revised yet, okay?
Commentary on Chapter 13: The noodle shop owner who came to visit the shop in "Food: Three years after opening the shop, the stupid girl wants to have sex for nothing" written by Ah Lian Shangtianbang.
I must not be a novice. It is rare for the author to write so much, so he just talks about some insights from reading the book. "The system is conscious" is a particularly annoying setting. The author's name is Ye Mingyu, and the protagonist in the book is Ye Meng. At the beginning, the author's system and the protagonist's questions and answers? Readers read novels, not the author for his own pleasure. You can add your inner subjective thoughts into the book, but it is recommended not to end the story yourself. Leave aside the author's presence in the book and don't let the characters play out. The first three chapters are very important for your grades. After reading your other two books, I feel that the problems are the same. Also, the start is very bland. Don't go into details about settings and introductions. Even if Long Aotian is a little more cheerful, it's better if the start can attract people. For example, in the first chapter, you are in danger just after traveling through time, and you are saved by a system plug-in at the end of the chapter. This is the cool point of a comprehensive comic. It is best to give people the beginning of the story in the first chapter, rather than chatting with the system or a certain character for a long time at the beginning. Sorry if it's not easy to say, I hope it will be helpful to start a new book.
Damn it, you mortal immortal is equal to the prehistoric saint, you are so awesome
When the original protagonist loses the beautification of the original author, it always feels like these original protagonists are going to stab you later.
1Fantasy Crystal 2Copy abilities 3 main gods 4 lucky gems 5 Universal Summoner 6 pieces of random system 7 Heart of the Demonic God 80,000 Realm Emperor Lotus 9 infinite magic circle 10 god level charm 11…………read readers' thoughts
前后差距太大,最近写的明说了就是一坨使,这t。m很难让人相信不是代写
Have you not watched the protagonist's time travel and soul ferry? Don't even know the function of Zhao Li's blood
Finally, it was decided that the comic book worlds of Fairy Tail, Black Clover and The Prisoner of Food will be newly written, and the old books will be continued with the follow-up of the magic teacher.
我有系统,回复1给你们看一看,回复6给你们一人一个
Why is Guoman safe and sound?
The new story content mainly focuses on Mondstadt, Liyue and Daozhi, invitations from girls and legendary missions.
希望这不是一本后宫种马文
I use two words to describe the protagonist you wrote, trash, the law of the great road versus the law of heaven, ** versus 10
Hello everyone I am a transcendent person from the universe, and now I am providing 800 time-travel opportunities for free! Just reply 666 to get a free time travel opportunity and system, the quantity is limited, first come first served! Beauty, eternal life, power, dreams, thousands of worlds, reaching the pinnacle of life, just this time! What are you waiting for! ? Also: We provide round trip service, remember to give it a good review ^3^ Get a free time travel opportunity and system, the quantity is limited, first come first served! Beauty, eternal life, rights, dreams, three thousand worlds, reaching the pinnacle of life, just this time! What are you waiting for! ? Also: We provide round trip service, remember to give it a good review ^3^
The main world is well written and has a lot of foreshadowing, but author, you forgot about the Council of Mists. . .
Get bail, tell the truth, make headlines, liar, cheat on subscriptions
It doesn't matter what you say about skills. In fact, internal strength is not as exaggerated as flying over walls and walls. But how can you control the weather when playing Red Alert? When fighting, do you still have to shout to the sky to borrow thunder to kill the opponent?
Speaking of which, do you want to learn a wave of impermanence and unparalleled ancient and modern? Anyway, there is a system, and you can get whatever you want.
海军只有卡普才有霸王色霸气战国是没有的****作者
秦始皇活了有800年吗?我记得他死的时候也才四十多岁吧,到你这简介特么直接800年?
The data of an exile is hundreds of billions, and there are also two training systems, which are mainly based on games, and there are also prehistoric elements. It's a hodgepodge.
唉。。不是母女一起收。。。天龙八部母女多。
Gao Shenghan? ? ? ? ? ? GI Joe: Thunderbolt? ? ? ? ? ? Let me guess the protagonist's name.
Regarding Chapter 98 of "Siheyuan: Full-level Fortune Telling at the Beginning" written by Call Me Xianggong, go to bed early to save electricity! Please subscribeChapter review.
About the rise of Zi Da, "TikTok's God-level Male God" Chapter 51 Lin Fan posted on Weibo to write a book [3/5, please give me flowers and review votes! ] Chapter review.
About "The Myth of the Heavens Arrive" written by Chou Jue Chapter 3 The Myth Arrives! (Please collect and ask for flowers) Chapter review.
Commentary on Chapter 15 of "American Comics: The Man Who Came Out of the Doomsday" written by Red Little Man. The End Means the Beginning and the End.
Chapter 39 hasn't been revised yet, okay?
Commentary on Chapter 13: The noodle shop owner who came to visit the shop in "Food: Three years after opening the shop, the stupid girl wants to have sex for nothing" written by Ah Lian Shangtianbang.