Fairy Tail: I Am Working on a Commission in All Realms

Will you accept the most beautiful queen in the universe?

My friend has a live broadcast of opening poker and changed the rank, and the content has also changed. If you look at the chapter name like this, you can almost know the general content of the chapter...

Xd, does anyone really read this book? What does it mean to change the original role of Kevin in Gebi to Jing Yuan? I don't know how popular the Song Coin book is, so why are there people following Fei Lu?

The Slime book is also your work. After all, you have written so much. Why is your book still stuck in the flavor of ancient Internet novels, classic self-exposure and honesty, but forget it, why does your protagonist still like to talk, the classic one is so He said that he thought he was going to fight, but in the end he stopped talking for a long time. Then why do you need the strength? And you have already written a fanfic. It is not you who has the final say at what time to wear it. It has to be based on the plot. You have watched too many star-stealing movies and imitated the old thief, and you will patch it later, right? Please be able to cut off the nonsense in advance. Aren't you making it more depressing for the readers? I didn't like your previous slime book, but I didn't want it, but it was an early product of yours. If I had an impression of your book, I would scold you directly, but you still write like this when you open a new book. People have to learn to make progress. If you want to make a living in online literature, can you update yourself with the times? You are still writing with your ancient style of writing. If it continues to be like this, I can only say, Ye Mingyu is out

If you write it like this, the protagonist deserves to be bullied

Isn't Zhao Min also a top female villain? Doesn't the system reward a puppet technique to resurrect Zhao Min as his dead soldier, and threaten a wave of great yuan with a backhand? You can also get a lot of system rewards, which will feel good!

You don't even know how to cheat, you still have to wait for the number of sales, you want to write a cool article and you want to dominate the protagonist, why don't you leave this **** reader alone?

He kept chatting and chatting.

Do you know why you are not popular? What are you writing about? Now that you have become an immortal, you don't care anymore? Are you a fool?

To be honest, why are you so detailed in your systematic self-introduction? Anyway, it gives me the feeling that if it wasn't for Little Amy, she wouldn't have fallen in love with the protagonist. It makes people feel that the protagonist is too low.

Forget it when it comes to writing about ghosts, but don't imitate my pre-Buddhist brother when writing about people. His characterization in the early stages was actually a bit clumsy.

Condensing all the words into a few words

Comments on Chapter 1 of "The Great Voyage: Signing in at the Beginning and Signing in to the Gravitation Fruit" written by Tomato Fried l1.

We don't quite understand it. If you have a problem, just say it directly. It doesn't mean that you can't change it, and you will be sentenced to death immediately. Now the more you explain, the more confusing it becomes. I feel that you should not reply from the beginning, and just write down what you think. Forget it, things have reached this point, and there is no point in talking about it. After all, it is my own problem. The conflict between the introduction and the actual content is like a fight between the left and right brains. I will not deny that there are problems, but I don't want to pay attention to people who will directly punish them with death if they have problems, without giving any room to correct their mistakes. Let me say something else here. If you have any questions and feel dissatisfied, you can just say it. The author will accept it humbly and make changes. But if you only give a negative review and leave the author to guess without saying anything, then I will ignore it directly because I just write whatever comes to my mind. I only work part-time and don't care about so many details. This can be seen in the fact that I can only use ellipses to divide paragraphs into paragraphs every time in the novel.

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