Online Gaming Storm Becomes Reality

What about your brain, the author? You are an ant, and you told the sword master not to bully the poor young man. How can you say that the protagonist is a waste in the early stage, but they say there are still people to protect you? You, you are just an ant, slapped to death, and I gave you the sword skills, haha

I read it twice, and every time I read about twenty chapters, I just couldn't stand it. It was too middle-of-the-road, and the emotions were too incomprehensible!

What kind of Sabi stuff are you writing? I have no brains.

The first chapter is extremely poisonous

Why do male protagonists act virtuously whenever they meet a woman?

You wrote the main character like Hama Pi

After reading the third chapter, I decisively deleted it. Is the Juggernaut such an idiot? A stunt is like a wife. Will someone cheat her away from her?

Where did your missile go? Was it eaten by you??

The author is in the late second grade of secondary school

Ahem, it's just embarrassing anyway, that's fine