Marvel's Invincible Mechanic

The writing is terrible, the plot is too messy, and the theme is unclear.

This feels so depressing. The main character is constantly running from the very beginning. I suggest renaming this game "Cloud Runner"...

It started out exactly like "Super Mechanic". Only the name was changed.

You can draw inspiration from other people's novels, but don't just copy them by changing the name or setting. Don't use too many modal particles; a few occasionally is fine. Using too many will make you sound like you're just posting fluff. Don't drag out the battle for too long; one or two chapters is enough. Too long is boring.

Did you copy this? It looks like I've seen it somewhere before.

Review of Chapter 21, "The Demolitionist," of "Marvel's Invincible Mechanic" by Black and White Fatty.