Dragon Ball: The Supreme Kai's Legend

I don't know if Dragon Ball has bugs. How can I write a novel if I don't know how to fix bugs? Use Dragon Balls to make a wish! Also, as a Kaiōshin, doesn't he have a space-time ring? If you use the Time and Space Ring to go to various Dragon Ball plots, you can make unlimited wishes! Earth Dragon Balls Namek Dragon Balls! The Super Dragon Balls of Universe 6 and 7 want to learn whatever abilities they want, but they still learn martial arts from the old man from Earth. It's really embarrassing for the time traveler.

Kaioshin, if you don't cultivate your divine power but cultivate your energy, isn't this losing the watermelon and picking up the sesame seeds?

Fortunately, you wrote two Dragon Ball fanfics, but in the end there was no progress at all. If the cultivation methods of gods were the same as the cultivation methods of humans, do you think Kaioshin would be so weak? Even if Kaioshin Xin has not cultivated, Kaioshins in other universes have not cultivated either? What Kaioshin cultivates is divine power, not combat power. If he could become stronger by exercising his body, he wouldn't have a super fourth transformation.

The consumption of Super Saiyan God is no better than that of Super Blue. Anyone who has seen the ending of Dragon Ball Super knows that in order to avoid the intense consumption of Super Blue, Sun Wukong specially changed into the form of Super Sailor God.

Your writing about mathematics makes me anxious!!

A creation. A disruption. Still a time traveler. Such a mentality. A magic wand? The mentality is not balanced at all. Keep pushing, keep pushing. Compared to Beerus. If you force it too much, it will be boring to see. Always comparing. How many years have you been practicing? How many years have you been practicing? You are born a god. People still cultivate step by step. That's the mentality. It makes people speechless.

**. Kaio Kami can envelope the entire universe with his divine thoughts. In order to learn martial arts, I need to go to the earth.

This guy won't be like Zamasu in the end and take possession of his body, right?

How about writing about Earth's martial arts? You must know that even if your combat power is not high, your level is definitely not comparable to that of Earth's martial arts. Looking at Goku's growth as Turtle Sage, Zer Sage, Earth God, and King of Kai... Until the end, he was also learning from the God of Destruction and Whis. Do you think it is the credit of Earth's martial arts? Even Kame Sennin's martial arts is based on theology, so a Kaioshin like realm martial arts doesn't need to go to Earth at all, because all the basic to advanced realm martial arts in the Dragon Ball world come from gods.

You** have finished writing Chapter 265, so what is that thing behind you? Fuck you, I downloaded more than 600 pictures at once, I'm so impressed with you, I'm so fucked