Reborn: Trading for Superpowers

It doesn't follow logic, what comes to mind is what it is, the preface doesn't match the postscript, it's excessive and too blunt, such a good idea is written like this, is it because the author's writing is not good or he doesn't care enough?

Commentary on Chapter 6, Undercover Policewoman, "Rebirth: Super Power Exchange" written by Shengshi Huangtu.

There are typos every time you turn the page, and the sentences are not smooth to read, so I am embarrassed to put them on the shelf.