Detective Conan: The Deal

Just think of it as a pornographic book, don't care about anything else

If you are crazy, you will ask for 1 billion, and if you don't have enough money, you will have sex with a woman. Ill

I'm really speechless. Why can't I read to the end every time I read a novel that I think is very good? You will always find traces of ghostwriting halfway through, and they are so obvious that you can't ignore them even if you want to! Except for the same name, the tone of speaking, the style of doing things, and even the background of the characters have changed! In the past, the cases were relatively simple and focused on describing warm daily life. Now, except for the case, there is almost no pause in the middle of the case, not to mention the most obvious bug: where is the exchange? Where are Sadako and Kayako?? Where are the three young lady waiters??? When did another system appear? Returning the main quests and side quests, this really doesn't treat the readers as human beings, right? It pisses me off!

The content is very calm. Except for the cases that were dealt with by the protagonist, other cases are written according to the original work. This is nothing, but the protagonist is gone except for his daily life with Xiaolan. Every case is also dispensable. The whole text is not interesting.

When we went to Sonoko Villa, we could clearly let Sadako and the others protect us, but we had to sacrifice logic for the sake of the plot. If you're afraid of being disturbed, isn't it the same as letting them stand outside the house?

Thank you fellow Taoists for trying the poison. Thank you.

Commentary on Chapter 15: The Gap Created by a Sentence in "Conan's Bargain" by Detective Moe.

Brother, don't you want to update your other book?

There are many typos and need to be improved

Commentary on Chapter 3: Kogoro's Ideal Son-in-law in "Conan's Bargain" written by Detective Moe.