The Immortal Qin Dynasty

Author, I would like to give you a piece of advice. You are writing a novel. I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you.

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you. What the hell are you writing? Life is already very tiring, but reading your book makes me even more tired.

Sincerely, **, the round plot is not as round as yours. Writing like this will only offend people.

Damn it, with the level of that dead Yun Zhongjun, it is impossible to refine those five... Pills.

Time traveler, how can you be so ****? It's really **** if you don't die. This kind of lick* would be ** if you didn't die in the first chapter.

Commentary on the first chapter of "The Immortality of the Qin Dynasty" written by Angel Zhuzhu.

You can tell from the first picture that the author is **, and you are the only one who can write about Shao Siming's qualifications

What an ugly book; cj

It's really bad. If I could rate it as a snack, I would only give it half a heart.