One Piece: The Ultimate Eye Technique

Nowadays, a lot of pirate fic authors are stupid. Why are you going to heaven just after you get the fruit? All fruit abilities consume physical strength, and those who are not in good health are dregs. You, the protagonist, just got the fruit of the pupil technique, and immediately got the Byakugan, and you can hit as many Bagua palms as you want? Are you sick? You're only eleven or twelve years old and haven't exercised yet.

I'm speechless. There's so much nonsense about killing someone, and I have to wait until someone else comes to save me before I do it. I wonder if the villain dies because of his too many words? Drunk drunk

I didn't want to read the first three chapters.

After reading Chapter 7, there are three plots that tell people to go away. There is so much nonsense, I can just kill them. If words are useful, why bother with fists? . .

**The book was a waste of my money and I couldn't write it in the right order.

First, where did your fruit come from? Second, did you travel through time in a systematic way? Third, you are so young and you are so arrogant just after you got the fruit. It feels like God is first and you are second. Although you wrote it, it's a self-pleasure article But please write more reasonably.

I was a bit speechless at the beginning, Sanmagatama released Amaterasu nb

The king has the talent of a king, and the cook has the talent of a cook. This is survival. Similarly, there is no "strong" or "weak" distinction between Devil Fruits.

The content is childish, I have to explain my moves to the enemy, I'm drunk.

Commentary on Chapter 11: Fujitora Yixiao of "The Ultimate Eye Technique of Pirates" written by Hai Feng Chui A Chui.