One Piece: The Ultimate Devil Fruit

Many of the main characters on Feilu have cold, gloomy, and indifferent eyes. They grab what they want and kill anyone who disagrees, even more arrogant than Long Aotian... They seem to lack humanity.

I really like this ability setting, but I absolutely despise scum. You can be lecherous, as long as it's consensual, and even a little domineering, but in terms of morality, you can't be evil. Randomly killing people and ignoring ordinary citizens? Privileges are acceptable, but they can't be used without restraint, right? Even if you're powerful, what are you worth to that kind of scum?

It's not just the synopsis that's terrible; the content is awful too. It feels like the author has never watched One Piece. The constant messing and revisions make it jarring and distracting.

Despite being Xinbing, she could reprimand Kizaru, only to be kicked to death by him. The End.

I admire the author for being able to write for so long.

Many of the main characters on Feilu have cold, gloomy, and indifferent eyes. They grab what they want and kill anyone who disagrees, even more arrogant than Long Aotian... They seem to lack humanity.

If you obtain the Op-Op Fruit and join the Navy, you'll be imprisoned. This setting is flawed.

That's nonsense, the Op-Op Fruit joining the Navy.

Those who read fanfiction are all One Piece fans, yet you're going to torture the main characters. Who among One Piece fans would read this kind of novel? You're reaping what you sow; no wonder it's not popular, you deserve it.

These are tropes from ten years ago, and people are still using them? I'm getting tired of this charade of showing off and getting slapped in the face. The protagonist's personality is like it was copied and pasted directly from those formulaic novels. I could guess the ending from the beginning.