Pokémon: A New Life for Ash

Master Zhi has become Master Tong, are you sure?

It's Reshiram, not Reshiram

This is not much different from the Pokémon Zhiye system.

What the hell are you writing? My eyes hurt when I read it.

This book has many contradictions, as copied from others.

Ling Xue at the beginning, what a *shit name

Did you, the author, have no brain when you wrote it? After reading only three chapters, I felt the urge to hit someone. My brain is on fire

I haven't finished the first chapter, I'm speechless.

Commentary on Chapter 12: The First Gym Tournament of "Pokemon: The Rebirth of Wisdom" written by Sokage SR.

How should I put it? The overall picture is pretty good, but the details and processing are not good enough. It's like a hodgepodge.