Bloodthirst

Did you mistake "a boy in his twenties"? Is this something a normal person can write? Then do you still want to write "a man in his seventies"?

The description of the fight is sparse, and there is no passion at all. It gives people the feeling of passing it by in one stroke. It is really Cai Xukun

The content is okay, but there are a lot of typos

Did you mistake "a boy in his twenties"? Is this something a normal person can write? Then do you still want to write "a man in his seventies"?

Is the character of the protagonist a pure villain?

Childish pig's feet, vague description, unknown content, look at the cat thread