Coiling Dragon's Heaven-Defying Talent

This is my first time writing a book. I feel like I can figure it out, but writing it feels boring and unvivid. An orphan who started his own business defied the will of heaven and reappeared in the Zhoutian Starry Formation, causing catastrophe. He traveled through the Coiling Dragon and became the younger brother of the protagonist. Watch him use this great formation to make his way in another world. This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.