Anime Crossover: The Scatterbrained Hero

*Besides, you still have to pay for a monthly subscription, which is a trap

There are so many typos, how did you put it on the bookshelf?

The farthest distance in the world is not the separation of life and death, but the fact that the other person has become calm and relaxed, but you still miss him. I wish you that after traveling through mountains and rivers, you still feel that life is worth living.

The content is vague, the main line is unclear, I can't see clearly what you wrote, and the layout is messy.

Commentary on Chapter 25 of "The Offline Male Protagonist of the Comprehensive Manga" written by Blood Love Bleed.

Commentary on Chapter 35: Chance Encounter in "The Offline Male Protagonist of the Comprehensive Manga" written by Blood Love Bleed.

Commentary on the first chapter of "The Offline Male Protagonist of the Comprehensive Manga" written by Blood Love Bleed.

The pig's feet are chatty, and there is almost no description of the environment throughout the story. The characters have no changes before and after. Like a stone, if you move from A to B, the stone is still the same stone.

I have read both of your books, they are really good