Starting as the Low-Grade Innate Treasure, the Space-Time Pearl, in the Primordial World

Even a pig improves after writing the same thing three times, but your third book is so shoddy. What a great title! No wonder you're a flop; if you write something like this, who else but you will flop?

The following dialogue doesn't need quotation marks anymore; it's painful to read.

The Chaos Green Lotus is a supreme treasure of chaos, but there's a ton of fan fiction, mostly just random, nonsensical writing.

Aren't the Chaos Bell, Taiji Diagram, and Pangu Banner all transformed from Pangu's Chaos Treasure, the Pangu Axe? How did they come to be born in the primordial world?

What kind of rubbish is this? The plot is a jumbled mess; you need to make the connections between the beginning and end. When you created the world, Qiankun and Luo Hou were still alive, so where did the Qiankun Cauldron and the Heavenly Demon Tower come from?

Judging from the title and synopsis of your novel, it's clear that this novel has already fallen into a rut. In the primordial fantasy novels, are there any spiritual treasures formed from fragments of chaotic treasures of the same grade as the Chaos Pearl that are lower than the highest grade? It turns out that your Chaos Pearl fragment, or even a core fragment, is only a low-grade innate spiritual treasure. It's utterly rubbish; it's so bad that it makes me lose all desire to look at it.

It's too weak, with too much repetitive content; some chapters are even repeated.

These kinds of novels all feature characters who are passively beaten up, and after being beaten up, nothing happens to them.

The chapters about accepting apprentices and dividing treasures made me laugh, I was so angry I laughed!

Three books, the same old formula, all good in name only. The only problem is the author; three books written and still this bad. Even AI could write better.