Wuxia Crossover: A Starter Pack, and I Make a Move on Huang Rong and Her Daughter

The protagonist's name is outrageous! It's disgusting.

Has no one ever told you that having an unpleasant-sounding main character name is a major taboo?

Since it's a story about time travel, the main characters' names should at least be classical, elegant, and sophisticated. Having Niu Zhiqiang sandwiched between Huang Rong, Guo Fu, and Guo Xiang would be incongruous and ruin the scene.

The pacing is too slow. Take the island for example; they've only won over Huang Rong, and she's not even fully loyal yet. Let's not even talk about Cheng Ying, and they haven't even gotten to sleep with Guo Fu. If you write this slowly, fewer and fewer people will read it.

The Renaissance style, an old-fashioned writing style, was common in many erotic books ten years ago. Books of this quality were common on Feilu in its early days, but are rare now. The biggest flaw in your book so far is the excessive suppression of power levels. A cohesive book's length isn't controlled by the protagonist's rate of power increase.

It was taken down for rectification and will be back in a couple of days.

Ideally, all the main characters' children would be daughters; that would be perfect.

It's back? This time it's a martial arts story! Huang Rong, the hard-working actress, is amazing!

Where's the crucial plot point? Where's the process?

Not updating but buying the top spot on the weekly charts, what a strange tactic.