Three Kingdoms: Peerless Lü Bu, Starting With Becoming Cai Yong’s Disciple

You are a warrior who has tens of thousands of kilograms of strength, and a scribe who can call the wind and rain. You are so awesome, but your city wall in Luoyang is three feet high????? What did you write?, Totally unreasonable

The protagonist is the first Zangzang refiner and the first sub-sage in hundreds of years, but he doesn't show it at all. He can even be stopped by more than a dozen yellow scarf warriors. His expressiveness is limited compared to Lu Bu in the novel.

Has your map become bigger? The protagonist's war horses travel three thousand miles a day, and they are all beasts or warriors. The march is too fast, and the battle situation changes greatly.

I don't know if the author has read the comments, but slaves were only used in the Qing Dynasty, and they used to be slaves!

Forcibly giving the jade seal to Sun Jian. Sun Jian fought with Liu Biao on the border of Jingzhou. The missing corner of the jade seal was at least after the Western Han Dynasty. Where did the former palace come from in Jingzhou in the Eastern Han Dynasty? The Eastern Han Dynasty without the national jade seal was not considered orthodox.

Lu Bu is just a commoner. He is not qualified to be apprentice to Cai Yong. That's where the class lies. Liu Beineng became a disciple of Lu Zhi, whose surname was Liu.

Everything else is fine, but the protagonist doesn't have his own talent. Is this reasonable?

A rare one in the Three Kingdoms literature!!!

There are a few points, one is the setting. The author has written the various abilities in the article so horribly. If you don't mention anything else, just say horses, which can travel three thousand miles a day. If it is just an exaggeration, it would be acceptable, but the article clearly states that it can be achieved to this extent. The author may not feel this concept. Just imagine that there are such horses that can run around everywhere, and the emperor himself can With at least a hundred powerful warrior cavalry equipped with such horses, how can there be unrest? After all, you can inspect the world at any time, and the time is only a few days. The second is the growth path of the protagonist. The writing is too smooth and dull, without any excitement. It makes you want to stop reading. There are some things later that I won't talk about. I can only say how the author adjusts them later.

Just look at the introduction. What's the difference between your literary approach and Taoism? It's the first time I've seen that literary approach has Yuanying Yin Shen and the like.