In the Name of the People: The Rise of Qí, Handong's Richest Man and Director of the Public Security Department

The third plot, the plot between Pei Qianqian and the nanny named Liu, see for yourself, is that character written by Qi Tongwei in the main hall? What is the difference between a student with social fears who has just left society? After reading the content of "Flag Raising", I stopped reading. The protagonist of this book has no sense of reading anymore, because you have not figured out who the protagonist you want to write about is, and you want to write about Qi Tongwei's rebirth. As you write, you become an ordinary person and travel to become Qi Tongwei, and then change again and again. How about playing? Chapters and chapters all mention that the protagonist knows detailed information about the case in his previous life, reminding him that he is Qi Tongwei, the principal, but the character he displays is... Haha

The protagonist commits suicide and is reborn, but when the story is told from the third person on TV, it's so confusing that he should be cut off.

I would like to give the author a suggestion, cut it and rewrite it. As for the most fatal problem, the separation of characters, who are you writing about? It has been made clear at the beginning that the protagonist is Qi Tongwei, who committed suicide in Guyingling. He is a powerful director with a violent agency at the department level. He punishes speculators and is ruthless. He died once and after being reborn, his physical fitness and brain memory have been greatly enhanced. But the plot of taking a train for the first time was the first step to shatter these innate characters. When the station police came around, there was no vigilance. He was very aware of the security situation at that time but had no preparations. Oh, no, one thing is that he brought people with guns, but it was useless. There were safer carriages and the station police reminded him. Is this what you said before that the protagonist was very aware of the situation at this time? Knowing it but not changing it? The second knife, 58 or 59, started with the sentence "I was unknown in my previous life and accomplished nothing?" Then within a few lines, he talked about the information he knew when he was the director...

Commentary on Chapter 78: Loan Repayment in Luzhou, written by Sui Yuan Lao Niu in "In Name: The Promotion Path of Director Qi, the Richest Man in the East of Han Dynasty".

Commentary on Chapter 77: The Role of Background in "In Name: The Promotion Path of Director Qi, the Richest Man in Eastern Han Dynasty" written by Suiyuan Lao Niu.

The writing is okay, but your update speed is too slow. If you don't put one on the shelves, one page will be put on the shelves every day. How many days will it take for one page to be put on the shelves?

Commentary on Chapter 54: Shanghai Stock Exchange in "In Name: The Promotion Path of Director Qi, the Richest Man in Handong" written by Suiyuan Lao Niu.

The writing style is delicate and the information is comprehensive. It can be seen that the article was written seriously, but it is too little and not enough to read. Come on, write quickly.

Commentary on Chapter 154: Twenty Tons of Gasoline in Suiyuan Lao Niu's "In Name: The Promotion Path of Director Qi, the Richest Man in Handong".

Commentary on Chapter 178 Gao Li's Response in "In Name: The Promotion Path of Director Qi, the Richest Man in the East" written by Suiyuan Lao Niu.