Siheyuan: My Father Is a Bandit

I feel like I'm off topic. This is a youth school drama from the 1960s. And what kind of righteous food are you giving out? Can you save me? As soon as someone investigates you, you are not a god. There are many smart people in the world, so you will be dissected.

At that time, all the pigs and sheep were collective, and it was only possible to fight in groups of two or three. Hundreds of sheep came to Beijing silently, and the top commanders of the Nine Gates and the Five Cities Military and Horse Divisions all lost their posts, and how many people lost their black hats. If you can transport a few hundred sheep into Beijing, you can lurk into an army. The person on the RMB desk didn't dare to sleep. At least the lockdown is more serious than the epidemic.

If there are no uncontrolled organizations and resources within the normal jurisdiction, it must be clarified. In addition, if you don't write the original novel, why would you write a fanfic?

The author has made it clear, but the plot is too dragging, and if it is a one-time delivery of national supplies, it is not necessary. It is completely unnecessary for you to send it multiple times over a long period of time. This is completely illogical. If the later part of the plot wants the country to know that it was you who sent it, it would be even more boring.

Dad, the bandit, is hopeless. Why don't you just write a thread?

Whenever there is something, you have to explain it in a long way, explain the characters in the play, explain the things of that era, either half a chapter or a chapter, but the key plot of the novel is less than one-third, just a few simple sentences like these are enough, there is no need to write a lot, you are not talking about it, it is indifferent to priority.

Everyone is afraid and doesn't want to offend. The protagonist is short of money or something, and insists on giving the job to the Liu family. Even if he can find a job after finishing school, he would rather throw the job away than give it to the courtyard house, because such a plot is off-putting.

Apart from other things, I haven't sold the book to someone who can take it seriously and finish a few novels, which is already better than 90% of the authors on this crappy website!!!! Finally, I wish those authors who hired gunmen lose a loved one every day!

The writing was good at the beginning, but then it got a little shaky. It's a pity to be honest! **.

After playing a good hand of cards to a pulp, the last thing people want to offend is a doctor, especially a good doctor. If you have such confidence, you can still be cautious and transparent. There is no need. As long as you behave upright and don't do evil things, it won't be a big problem.