Anime Crossover: Starting with Tuning Gensokyo, I Build a Miniature Garden

I feel that the game is not big enough. The game like Beng Tie Modulation World is bigger. The protagonist is unique. The Black Tower is just simulating the universe and copying the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist passed by in an instant and almost exploded the entire Beng Tie Universe.

I hope the male protagonist interacts more with the female protagonist. If you hadn't said that this was not a behind-the-scenes story, it would have run out. I really don't understand what's so interesting about this kind of story.

Well, Fran is not completely ignorant, right... Take Fran away as soon as possible

Dear brothers, the plot is a bit broken and I can't continue writing. Kowtow to plead guilty, and issue an edict for sin. Finally, let me summarize a little bit: First of all, I haven't written a book for a long time, so I am very unfamiliar. This is a sin, Secondly, the level is not good, which is the second sin. Specific analysis: 1. Many settings in Golden Finger are a bit redundant and contradictory. Invincible is not invincible, upgrade is not upgrade. Looking at the entanglement, many comments have criticized this. I have also seen it, but it has been written and cannot be changed. The entanglement will also affect the mentality. 2. The male protagonist has no other motivation except for color. This results in a mainline design that is meaningless. When I was writing it, it was very painful to write every chapter related to the main plot. 3. The outline is too simple. This is the key. As a result, problems 1 and 2 were not discovered. In the middle of writing, I found that there was no follow-up, and then the more I wrote, the more biased it became. 4. In fact, this is also a problem caused by 3. There are too many characters and too many female characters. Basically, after four or five branch plots, the sense of expectation for the first heroine has been broken. You can't write the emotional line like this, the writing is not strong enough. 5. Halfway through the writing, I wanted to change my main focus to writing the daily direction, because the number of subscribers to the Gensokyo part is really large, which means that many readers come to Gensokyo, but my part is tied to the main line of the Hakoba world. The world of Little Garden is the core pursuit of the heroine. There is no way to skip it and just write about daily life. This is the part that I thought of myself. There are probably many other things that I didn't expect, such as character portrayal and so on. There must be problems, but the above problems are more prominent. This is my first book in three or four years, and I deeply feel the importance of practice. It is an edict to sin against oneself, and it is also a reflection on oneself. If the level is good, writing Gensokyo can improve the performance by at least 23 times, which shows that this can also be written in Feilu. Finally, I kowtow once again to apologize. I am extremely sorry!!!

Author, I think it's better to bring in as few Mijia gadgets as possible.

Do you know how to write about the Mi family? If so, don't say that dead Otto is the best Otto when you go to Beng San, and then Barabala talks a lot of nonsense and doesn't kill him. When you go to Genshin Impact, don't do whatever you want with Fu Nina. At first, I felt like my dream was coming true when I wrote to help Fu Nina. However, too many authors wrote like this, and she got a little tired of it. When you go to Bengtie, don't let the people in the Genius Club study it at will. They are just Bo Shizun's scapegoat backup, and there is nothing serious about it.

Let's forget about writing about the Mi family... I'm tired of aesthetics, the Mi family is everywhere, and I can't find any comprehensive comics that I can read now. I still hope to see worlds like Go to Earth and Game of Life. But the author can make his own arrangements, and Xingyue can also write about Chaldea. Anyway, the theory of parallel worlds is over. Come on (*^ω^*)

Why do you keep talking about cutting and cutting? The most essential authority to counterfeit Hakoniwa has always been in the hands of the protagonist, or in other words, the backhand, but the protagonist has been there all the time, as if he is fooling others into thinking they are fools, and keeps saying to cut it off, do you believe it? If you talk about separation, it would be much better to use Hakoba as the dream world of the protagonist's abilities and as an independent server.

You revealed that the plot was nothing, but what you showed to the characters was really a bit poisonous. In the original story, the heroine interacted intimately with the original hero, and was molested by the villain. These are all specific scenes. Are you just going to release them like this? If you want to patch them, it's almost the same.

I can't post a single chapter, so I can only post it in the comments section. The writing is very serious, so I just have a day off on New Year's Day, woo hoo.