Anime Crossover: Divine Craftsmanship from the Start, with the Power to Transmigrate

The younger brother of Enichi Kuni? Brother and brother can't even figure it out, so why are you writing nonsense? Sonoichi is the younger brother.

Missing girls, in fact, there are some girls that you don't want to accept, so just pretend they don't exist if you don't write them down. But if you superfluously said several times that you care about the heroine and don't like the supporting actress, then the problem is huge. This is a completely poisonous point. Then, you knew how to adjust the timeline of the protagonist's appearance in Zhanchi, and saved Tazmi's fellow villager girl, but in the end, the adjustment was not completed completely. In addition to indirectly saving Nezuko, Masaki and Kanoe died directly? Even if they are alive, won't Kanzaki Aoi and Fallen Princess accept them? Just forget about Fallen Princess and forget about it. Why did Aoi Kanzaki specifically mention it?

Looking at the back, the more I read, the less it looks like a novel and more like a product introduction. Explanatory text appears in clusters and repeatedly, seriously affecting the rhythm of the narrative.

When it comes to cultivating oneself, why are they all magic weapons? Magic weapons are objects and not people, so there is no such thing as fusion or bloodline! Don't write about armor after it's fused, it'll just become mindless and speechless just by looking at it! So am I the only one watching it as a real person?

I'm speechless. The protagonist can stop eating beef and still worries about this and that.

After the protagonist comes back and has the power to destroy the country, is he still afraid of Qu Tong?

Why do so many authors like to write that Esdeath will be able to Mahabhatmo as soon as she appears? This move was specially developed by Esdeath to capture Tazmi, and it was impossible to do it in the first place.

A magic weapon is a magic weapon. There are endless amounts of Teigu and Teigu all day long. Is this refined one still called Teigu? What about the priority and grade?

It's too double-standard, and it's written as if it's brainless. It's inexplicable. The first world quoted Red Thought, but it was too **to use it for brainwashing. The important thing about thought is to enlighten people to think independently, but he used it to brainwash people and use liberated thoughts to do the persuasive things of feudal landlords. Then there is the hatred of the main world of the second world, which he uses to take revenge on the new world. It is also called revenge. The point is to use the name of revenge to force girls into prostitution, and to ask people to let go of their hatred. It's simply funny. He said that if you hate it, then hate it. I have a clear conscience. I think the protagonist has style, but it turned out to be a double standard. Just write it well, and always talk about the country's hatred. I thought you were going to do something big, but it turned out to be a big deal for me.

I'm a novice, but if I can write my own original plot in Feilu and don't follow the trend, it's already considered good. I don't even know how long it's been since I recharged money.