Anime Crossover: Building a Multiverse Retinue Starting with Shiina Mahiru

It's ridiculous that the protagonist, a high-ranking demon, feels a bit dangerous in the world of Kill! Red.

Leona couldn't beat Akame even without transforming into a demon, which is understandable, but if she could still be knocked away by Akame even after transforming into a demon, then what's the point of transforming into a demon?

Please write less action; it's really bad. I hate it when a one-sided battle is written as an evenly matched fight—it's so padded out. The descriptions aren't great either. For example, in one battle, how many times did the protagonist show no emotion?

Too many repetitive plot points make the story feel weak and drawn out. Every time, the character has to explain that they are a demon, and if others don't believe them, they transform. Every time, the process of becoming a familiar has to be explained, and everyone has to feel embarrassed. The reactions to taking off clothes are all the same, the reactions to being touched are the same, the reactions to growing wings and a tail are the same, and so on.

The only downside is that the protagonist levels up too slowly. He recruited two familiars, both reaching level 5. Then one of them leveled up from 5 to 13, while the protagonist only leveled up from 21 to 22. That familiar quickly surpassed the protagonist.

This author is really good at writing; if a chapter is 2,000 words long, a single attribute panel takes up 500 words, and it keeps increasing. Eventually, one panel might even fill an entire chapter. The author might as well not write anything else at all, just show off the new panel every few words, and happily collect their money.

After you finish writing, I suggest you check it. There are a lot of misspelled names, and things like "a said to a".

Stop pointing to the next day, that's the day after tomorrow.

What did I see at the beginning? The protagonist undressed a woman in the park and carved a contract?! What?! Is he trying to get everyone to watch? Will he become a prostitute when he gets home?

It's not as good as that Lynn the Devil.