Wuxia Crossover: I'm a Wudang Disciple, and I Have Insight from the Start!

What you need to write a book is a sense of immersion in order to be able to read it... Now you want me to take on the role of "two fools" one after another??? I really can't put it in my place... Fei Lu, no one will read what you write like this... I assert that either you come back and a time traveler's memory returns to normal, or you just continue to write like this... Then there is a high probability that you will drink the northwest wind... No one will read it.

The plot was okay at the beginning, but it feels bad to have dementia all the time.

The character design is okay, the plot is terrible, and there is no sense of immersion or enjoyment.

The main character is too stupid, if it were normal it would be a masterpiece

Damn it, are the devils so powerful?? Come on, it's unreasonable for the Ming Dynasty to seize such a large territory if it was so weak.

At the beginning, Xiaofeng was looking for trouble at the transfer ceremony of the leader. It was a slap in the face at the time of the transfer. He couldn't be so stupid, even if he had to go ahead or complete the transfer for the sake of exposure. . . . .

The plot is interesting, I hope it can continue to maintain this level

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. When you are fifty years old, your name will be engraved on the long river of novels, and the Immortal Emperor will not be able to erase your mark. Your footprints will guide future generations in the streets and seas. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

From the first picture of Feng Baobao's character to now, what has it become?

Early updates please update more quickly