Honghuang: Fusing Primordial Blood and Attaining Mythic Daluo Sainthood!

The first one is a Great Luo Golden Immortal, the next one is a Golden Immortal.

Chapter Twenty, the Primordial Measuring Ruler, was mistakenly written as a compass. It's truly speechless. Was this book written by an AI with utter stupidity?

The Golden Crow Transformation into Rainbow Light Divine Power, which you described as the Roc's Flight Technique, is too fantastical, nonsensical, and riddled with plot holes.

Chapter Three is yet another instance of a wildly altered and rewritten script involving the innate spiritual treasure, the Golden Dragon Scissors. Originally, it was simply two primordial yin-yang dragons that Tongtian forged into the innate spiritual treasure, the Golden Dragon Scissors.

Chapter Four is another original storyline. The Three Immortal Islands are the islands where the Three Immortal Maidens of Sanxiao were born, and they are not the same as the Three Immortal Islands formed by the three fragments of chaos.

Chapter Six, "Extremely Poisonous," has a plot hole. The twelfth-grade golden lotus had three grades bitten off by mosquitoes, not the twelfth-grade black lotus. Also, the twenty-fourth-grade green lotus shattered into three sacred treasures for achieving enlightenment. It seems the author didn't read the original prehistoric novels; they only read third-hand versions.

Chapter Six of this book is ruined by the deadly poison. The Three Immortal Islands of the Primordial Chaos, which allow travel beyond the Heavenly Dao, have had their innate formation broken. The Thirty-Sixth Grade Pure World White Lotus is at least a Chaos Spiritual Treasure, weakened by a factor of ten thousand! A whole bunch of logical errors...

This book lacks any sense of immersion; it's a pathetic, weak prehistoric fantasy novel. A single bolt of annihilation divine lightning nearly destroyed the thirty-six-petaled white lotus—it's a joke! It's like a fictional world of incomplete immortal treasures being destroyed by a single bolt of annihilation divine lightning.

The cultivation technique is the Pangu Divine Art, but it lacks the Five Elements Laws. The protagonist is also a very useless innate Kan Earth Essence. The Chaos Breath Soil transforms into the Nine Heavens Breath Soil, becoming a lower-grade innate Kan Earth Essence, a drop of three levels. There are a lot of writing techniques that fail to create a sense of immersion.

Chapter Thirteen is also incredibly toxic. The Three Immortals of the Overseas Regions, with Penglai later becoming a center for independent cultivators, possess the Pure White Lotus, the Golden Dragon Scissors, the Primordial Golden Cauldron, the Nine-Bend Yellow River Formation, and the Immortal-Binding Rope. What about Yingzhou and Fangcun? Don't they have good innate spiritual roots?