Wuxia Crossover: Taking Advantage of Li Mochou, Empowering Her with an Energy Transfer

Author, can I ask, I just started watching it, how pretentious and slap-in-the-face the plot is? Why is it so annoying to see enemies attack a bunch of people and say it's over and the protagonist is dead or something like that? Isn't this the case in all subsequent plots? Also, although the readers and authors are both modern people, don't you think it's a bit inconsistent to say words like "big boss" and "instant kill" from ancient people?

It's too much to write about the reactions of various forces. It's unnecessary. Also, the protagonist has become a Grand Master. Why do passers-by think that it's a great opportunity for him to join the Dragon Protection Villa? It's completely illogical. It's all for the sake of having fun. It's hard to explain the basic logic. I'll give it a try.

I've read almost half of it. I don't have any major problems with the author, but there are quite a lot of small ones. I don't know if the author has noticed many details. For example, the protagonist has never used the magical aspect except for the first time in front of Guo Jing, but an inexplicable passerby knows that the protagonist has the magical aspect. Is this reasonable? Then the author crazily adds enemies to the protagonist to create a sense of oppression, which makes it very uncomfortable, and it always feels like everyone knows the plot. For example, in the Leigu Mountain part, not to mention how a person knows the Xiaoyao sect of the hidden sect, what if that old Xingxiu guy knew that he had arrived in the morning and still had to wait for the protagonist? Moreover, the protagonist didn't tell anyone about the Wuyazi internal power, so why did the whole world suddenly know about it? And your information flows too fast, right? Besides, how do the people on that list know that the protagonist's accurate state is the early stage of Grand Master? There are so many unreasonable places.

Is Huang Rong second-hand again?

It's not bad to see the latest subscribed chapter. The protagonist is not like other books who accept all kinds of crap, and this is worthy of praise. Although he is ruthless, he can distinguish right from wrong. And the portrayal of the heroine is also very good, very real and vivid. There is no one who loves Huan Huan the most. Shi Feixuan looks good so far, but I don't know when to push it.

I've finished reading it, and it's okay. What is the relationship between Huang Rong in this novel and the Beggar Clan? Why can Huang Rong control the people of the Beggar Clan?

Dear adoptive fathers, it is not easy for a young author to write a book. It only costs 10 yuan to work hard all day every day. If you don't like this book, or think it's not well written, you can change the author and find a book you like. Thank you for not attacking or insulting the author in the comment section. After all, if you don't like reading, there are still readers who do. Although this book won't make much money, I will still finish the book for the sake of the more than 20 readers who keep reading. Unless there is really no subscription at all in the later period, then I can only choose to force the ending. But don't worry, I will let you see better plot content after it is released!

The author is awesome, the new book has been updated with more than ten chapters at once.

**The author felt that he wanted to kill Zhao Min in this chapter, but instead felt that he was playing a game and forcibly brought the protagonist and Zhao Min together.

After it is put on the shelves, will this still be a car bound for kindergarten? . . . Ahem, forget it, it's nothing. Reward yourself.