
Azur Lane: The Commander with Cutting-Edge Technology
碧蓝航线:黑科技指挥官
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 592k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Light Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
243Chapters
1.7MReads
8.7kMonthly reads
5.7kFlowers
8.8Score
Honours
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Reader comments 28
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So, what do you mean, you don't accept girls, you don't have any feelings for ship girls, and you treat ship girls as comrades? Just hang up as a ship girl and play with black technology? If you think this way, just download the book. You won't survive. Treat the ship girl as a comrade instead of your wife. Almost no readers will think like you do. It's too abstract. After reading the ship girl article, who will come to see you play with black technology? Aren't they all here to see the ship's wife? If you insist on putting the cart before the horse, then you are invincible. How many photos are you going to send for love?
It's just a scam, please change the name, thank you, don't write Azur Lane, don't use other people's names if you don't understand the settings.
After reading a few more chapters, it turned out that the ship-r text had tricked Azur Lane. What about showing off the boat, what about having too many commanders. It's all poisonous for Azur Lane players.
No, isn't the hull of a ship girl just the body? Do you just let the workers go up? What a heaven-defying setting, I was so confused. I originally thought you said it had been modified before and wanted to see it, but the opening scene was struck by lightning. The ship girl had an acting commander before she met the protagonist. Do you know what the commander means to the ship girl? Did your wife have a surrogate husband before marrying you? My body was being penetrated and ejected by other workers at will. I was really invincible.
Why is it that he has multiple fingers written on his skin? Do you like to work for others so much? The resource construction permissions are all blocked by others. It feels like someone else's wife is borrowing you for fun. If you have multiple fingers, you can't give too many plots to the supporting characters. Writing it out is just pretending to be a slap in the face. But who wants to see this in Bilan? It's not necessarily possible to write out all the ships by writing a thousand pictures. You have to use multiple fingers. The plot allocation is a mess. There are not enough individual plots for so many ships, so what?
Let's just say that the book was written by Captain Azur Lane. The appearance of the ship girl is wrong, and the attitude towards the ship girl is different from that of ordinary Azur Lane players.
Author, I have read your previous books and they are all very good. But this book looks weird. Let me first talk about a few things that feel weird. 1. Ship equipment: After the ship girl is humanized, there is no problem in reducing the ship equipment in the same proportion. However, the mid-level technology electromagnetic gun you constructed is not miniaturized. Why does the protagonist lose weight and size when he can hold it in his hand? , Put it into the body of the ship girl. You said that you were holding it up with your hands, but you were actually holding it up with the system, and then slowly shrunk it into the humanoid structure of the ship girl. It's much better this way 2. I still don't know the background of this world. Is the human side firmly in the upper hand, evenly matched, or at a disadvantage? I don't know at all, and I am confused. As a result, the behavioral logic of the characters seems very strange. 3. To add to the previous point, the protagonist's port is in ruins, so I acquiesce to the disadvantage of human beings, and in this difficult situation for all mankind, let alone helping each other, there is Spring Breeze Port. It is said in the article that it is very wealthy, but people from dozens of sea miles away come to add insult to injury, and there is also a joke-like gambling fight. It gives me the feeling that the National Army will be pilled sooner or later in 1949, which is very bad. There is a feeling of fear that humanity will never be finished. Droughts have killed people, floods have caused them to die, and then they are still fighting for power and profit. 4. Continuing with the above supplement, according to the struggle for power and the intrigues of the top management in the article, I will assume that humans are fully dominant, and it does not matter the casualties of the ship girls. After all, judging from the gambling battle at the Dongfeng port, if the protagonist does not win, the resources will be cleared, and the Javelin Z33 will undoubtedly die. Then there should be technology to supplement the ship girls, such as the ship girl construction room used by the protagonist. So here comes the question. When the personnel on duty at the Chunfeng Port saw the ray of light built by the protagonist, they found it inexplicable. According to the article, the Chunfeng Port was very wealthy and had a whole fleet, which meant that ship girls were often built. Then this light should be very common among them, so why were they confused. 5. During the gambling battle, the protagonist has broken the protective shield used by the opponent for acting. According to reality, it should be directly damaged by the opponent. The article says that the rules of acting lead to no damage. How can it be non-damaging in reality? So at this time, I felt that this was a game world with data rules. To sum up, the background of this world is still blurry, and you can call it reality. The writing is very heavy, and the logic and behavior of the characters feel very strange. I feel that it is not as well written as before. I hope the author pays attention to it. Anyway, I kept frowning when I read it.
Not the only commander? Forget it, maybe the taste of other websites has improved, and maybe I won't have to look at it anymore, so I'll take a look and give it a try.
Another story using Battleship Girls to set Azur Lane? The commander of Azur Lane is the only one, there is no such thing as an acting commander. In the absence of the commander, the camp flagship takes command.
The setting of the ship girl is a bit confusing. Is the glory blonde, does she have a scepter in her hand? Is this a victory? Humans have the upper hand? Forget it, it's just Siren acting.