As a Villain: From the Start, I Steal the Protagonist's Fiancée

People read novels on this subject whenever they are written, but you want to give the protagonist an awesome family, but you don't want to give too much. The name of the Immortal Family is pretty awesome, but it turns out that a third-level ** can be the third elder. It's really funny.

I don't know whether you will delete the comment or not, but I just read the first few chapters and I really couldn't complain. First of all, I don't know if you gave the villain points casually, without any logic, robbing two hundred luck and giving it to three thousand, or giving five hundred luck to ten thousand? The second is the choice of the medicine master. Have you forgotten your family background? You don't want to enhance the soul source, but you want a puppet? The Immortal Family lacks so few elixir recipes and tools? This Immortal Family is really rich. Also, the third elder you have strengthened is only at the saint level, and is still very low. Then any saint girl will be in the shrine immediately. If she upgrades to a higher level, she will be a saint. She should be able to reach it when she is in her twenties, right? The third elder of an immortal family, a talented saint? Is he only forty or fifty years old? Or is he still a saint despite being thousands of years old? Is this called the Immortal Family? Your cool writing should at least be logically closed.

I almost died laughing after reading two chapters. The protagonist's family, the third elder of the Immortal Family, is only in the third level of cultivation.

Don't ask for anything else, you must be happy. As long as the protagonist is not a coward.

The words "Swallowing Heavenly Demonic Skill" appear everywhere. It's aesthetically exhausting and boring.

The protagonist who is destined to be more of a villain than the villain, the supporting character who is mentally retarded, and the protagonist who has established a monument in the name of a villain, why are they all in this routine? The reason why the protagonist is a protagonist lies in his charisma, which is recognized by readers and people around him, rather than his ridiculous luck.

About Chapter 3 of "Being a Villain: Cutting Off the Fiancée of the Protagonist at the Beginning" written by Spring and Winter, The Grandpa in the Ring? Just grab it! Chapter review.