Wuxia Crossover Showdown: From the Start, I Have a Pack of Raptors

How should I put it? You're like this: first you're all compassionate and righteous, like you're trying to build a utopian image, then you turn around and try to wipe out the Ling Cage characters you just met, calling them insignificant ants and such. Isn't that just extreme imperial capriciousness? Aren't you ruining your image? First you're all comrades, then you're all I don't eat beef—how awful!

Holy crap, is the author out of their mind? They were writing something perfectly fine and then suddenly added a chat group; I instantly lost all desire to continue reading. Any book that includes a chat group is a terrible book.

Author, you're confused. Where did Zhao Ji get the guts to say he'd rather die than be a ruler of a fallen kingdom? Historically, he was the tourism ambassador of Harbin. And after the sheep-leading ceremony, he lived for several years, during which time he even fathered a bunch of children in Wuguo City.

Zhao Guanjia is a complete scoundrel, we must get rid of him. Keeping that cowardly Zhao Guanjia around is only a disgrace to our Chinese civilization. We must get rid of Zhao Guanjia's people.

This protagonist's writing style is hilarious, so embarrassing! I don't need to buy a house anymore, because I've got a sore toe! Leading troops back to the capital, he rambles on and on about all sorts of random things. Anyone who didn't know better would think it was a coronation ceremony or a grand imperial sacrifice.

Why did the protagonist, who seemed so righteous and upright in the beginning, suddenly go berserk and indiscriminately kill everyone in Ling Cage? What were you trying to express with this plot? Was it to show the inviolability of imperial authority, the emperor's ruthlessness, the emperor's indifference, or the emperor's decisiveness in killing?

When will the protagonist march south and destroy the Song Dynasty? Honestly, aside from Zhao Kuangyin, who had some ability, the other emperors were either mediocre or utterly shameless. It's better for them to be killed by the protagonist than captured by foreign tribes and forced to perform the "sheep-leading ceremony"—at least dying at the protagonist's hands would be more dignified.

My goodness, I thought I was reading an essay. There are so many embellishments. And some things have already been said in the previous sentences, but they still need to be explained again in several more sentences.

How to evaluate it? The author's work can only be described as starting strong but declining in quality. The beginning was actually quite good, but the chatbot scene completely ruined it, destroying the protagonist's character. Forget about the imperial schemes; all I saw was a protagonist with faith turned into a lunatic obsessed with so-called imperial schemes.

Too many modifiers are bad; we should incorporate more plot elements.