Uma Musume: From Local Races to Legend

The protagonist I've been writing lately is becoming increasingly gentle. The team doesn't participate in any central or overseas competitions. The formula is to train some elf girls who aren't on the main team and then persuade them to transfer. So far, none of the elf girls who participate in competitions didn't have a trainer before joining the protagonist's team.

It's going to be available for purchase soon, will anyone still read it?

If the protagonist doesn't get any food and says "good Samaritan," I won't argue. But if they do get food, what should we call the protagonist? I watch Uma Musume for the romance; the races are just a side story. Don't meddle. If a Uma Musume runs off with someone else, where are you going to cry? As for the Uma Musume having trainers, the author can just change the setting; I don't mind.

Could you please reduce the amount of match description? I wanted to see the scenes of the couple getting along well. I've subscribed to all the chapters except the match ones. One or two chapters about the match would be enough, but instead, you're writing 7 or 8 chapters for each match. I skipped all the chapters if I hadn't subscribed. You're making a complete rout seem like a hard-fought victory.

Why insist on padding? You're writing a whole chapter about a single memory, and one that's not even one of your own? Is this how you play the game?

There's not much daily interaction between the main character and the horse girl. I thought the training camp would be full of heartwarming moments, but instead, it's mostly about training and making medicine. Plus, the training content seems a bit repetitive. Maybe you could gloss over the training and write some sweet moments instead?

You're so annoying! You always cut chapters off at crucial moments. Looks like I'll have to start reading this book myself. I follow it every day and you still manage to cut chapters off for me.

What's in the latest chapter? Is it about winning the competition unfairly? Or is it about relying on others and being incompetent to win?

After not reading Feilu for over half a year, all I found upon returning were books about movie reviews and summaries – the kind of cheesy stuff you only read for fun. Finally, I found something I could genuinely enjoy reading.

It's well-written, but I'm a little worried it might be abandoned if I write it on Feilu.