
Honkai Impact 3rd: What Do You Mean, the Game Template Is Loading?
崩坏:什么叫游戏模板加载中?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 249k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
72Chapters
1.5MReads
13.1kFlowers
9.3Score
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Reader comments 50
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It doesn't matter if you gain Jojo's power, but forcing yourself to speak like Jojo feels abstract. . . . . . .
I'm writing about adding a live broadcast room, Shi
The protagonist's name is too similar to that of a star, and I don't know that the plot is similar to that of aboriginals. I have no problem with you writing that Jojo has strong special abilities, but he is not strong with fists. The protagonist is just an ordinary person, and he probably can't even break the anti-matter army's defense. Also, the number of words in each paragraph should be slightly controlled. Some paragraphs have too many words, and the character of the protagonist is too strange. He was slapped by others in the beginning and bled, and when he faced any enemy later, he was yelling and yelling inexplicably. It was so embarrassing that he wanted to get angry.
The live broadcast room is a poisonous point. If you don't have a live broadcast room, you won't be able to write about Xingtie now, right?
The subject matter is good, but the writing style is quite awkward
Can't you just use a template to write it down normally? If there is something wrong with your brain, bring a live broadcast room out? Would it be possible without this thing?
Not buddy! It's a female channel you're pushing, right?
To be honest, I feel that the protagonist is written to be somewhat mentally ill...
How could a fan be on a female channel?
I clicked in several times and stopped at Chapter 11. Every time I saw Nanook open his mouth and talk about how he dared to use a toy lightsaber to disobey and destroy, I really couldn't stand it anymore.