Anime Crossover: Editing Everything and Joining the Chat Group

Um, I was speechless when I saw the introduction saying that Raiden was really conceited about his Wu Xiang Yi Dao. Wu Xiang Yi Dao is the realm of Lei Qi Qing's understanding. He can perfectly control his strength, sense your strength, and issue a fatal blow. Unless your strength surpasses Raiden's power, or an external force suddenly intervenes, and even if the author made a typo and the shadow is true, Lei Qiu will still be conceited when only a little fox is left to die next to Lei Qi? They are all autistic, okay?

I don't understand why you have to go to school. Every protagonist in a comic novel is this type. Obviously, the primary goal is to live forever and be immortal, but you have to go to school to waste time. Others can't lift the table and listen to nonsense. You can lift the table and still listen to nonsense. You are really a female channel, right? How is this different from Asashi, the protagonist of Japanese comics?

After watching it for a while, I felt that the author was going to be a fan of Da Bing in the future. The male protagonist of a well-traveled Shuangwen comprehensive comic suddenly came and taught the protagonist the power of Bai Yueguang, who became the protagonist and then disappeared. Then the protagonist became stronger just to travel through many worlds to find this person. Wen Qing Bing Fan. Let it grow for a while to see if it will explode.

Fujiwara Chika puffs up her chest that is not plump?? Chapter 1: This??? Really?

There are too many restrictions and additional restrictions are added

No, why do I feel that the author's mind was very messed up when he wrote the book? There are too many inconsistencies. It is said that interference in things requires inspiration points. How did you interfere in the first place? In the following Jun Yang, the protagonist spent all his points and said that he had no points because he relied on Tohsaka Rin to buy his business. Pincai returned some copies, but after that, the protagonist put the product on the shelf, and Tohsaka Rin bought it. Did the protagonist put any product on the shelf before that? When the author was writing this, he was thinking about the plot of the next paragraph. Either the writing was a string or the logic was wrong.

I feel like the anime character's personality is a bit broken

Not to mention anything else, let's just talk about the combat power concept of Xingyue World, the appearance of Tohsaka Rin, and the star iron world, which are all universe-level combat power concepts, the appearance of March Seven, and the appearance of Alicia, the Herrscher of Honkai Impact. These three worlds are instantly better than others in terms of combat power performance and appearance performance. For these heroines, heroines from other worlds can't compete with each other, especially in the world of Pirates. I don't even want to say how hungry the author is. The painting style of Demon Slayer World is not much better. It's just Demon Slayer at every turn. Also, can this world of Apocalypse be a little innovative?

A good book will turn you into a literary youth

It's just a bunch of random writing. It's a mess even if it's criticized. Do you have an outline?