Starting in an Ancient Honghuang Village, I Join the Chat Group

Chapter 40 is the worst chapter in my opinion. The way of erasing memory traces after the Holy Sacrifice is really bad. The remaining people have lost their memory and have forgotten the suffering of the cursed child. They have forgotten that they once maintained the bottom line of human beings and even noble moral character. They also forget that countless people have been punished by God because of the evil of human nature. This can be said to be a warning to the remaining people and a warning that goes deep into the soul. However, the author's way of "eliminating" is too "hard to explain in one word". The author who wrote the plot of this dark bullet should be more sympathetic, but the ending is like this, which is disappointing. I hope the author can improve next time.

A strong man like the male protagonist will not think that mortals are good-looking, because a strong man can see the flaws and impurities in mortals at a glance, just like what is written in a novel. In his eyes, mortals are as if they have fallen into a cesspool and are covered in filth.

Stop watching. What the hell, you have to add a bunch of anime characters and write them in a nondescript way. Nothing

What is the meaning of the protagonist's journey to the world of God's Tomb other than to accept women? I didn't see it at all. I wrote it off. Don't worry about the number of words. Everything in the world is for profit, and everything in the world is for profit! Just end it if you don't get anything that actually means something to the protagonist. Tomb of Gods, how many chapters are you going to write before it ends? It's so boring.

Author, can you put double quotes when writing dialogue? Not only double quotes, but also commas and periods must be added.

I am really convinced. Just sleeping with him can make the woman rise to the level of semi-ancestral. What else can this person do? Why not just sleep with him and it will be over?

How much do you want to write about the Immortal Realm? I came here to write about the Immortal Realm. There are many novels about Zhe Tian and I'm tired from reading them. You can write about Journey to the West, Fengshen, Yuanshen, Nezha. If you don't write enough, there is also Legend of the Seven Realms. You must write more. In the world of immortality, although Chen Dong's Zhetian is also good-looking, the more people who write about it, the more people will read it. You can go to Zhetian World in an emergency, and you can go there more times. Zhetian is a perfectly written long story, and there are many people who have written about it. If you compare it, it will show that your writing is not good.

Write more about the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist in the Immortal Realm and write less about Japanese comics. If you write too much, it feels like the word count is too low. It would be better to add some fairy tale dramas.

It's so uncomfortable to watch, so I won't read it anymore. The layout and dialogue segmentation are really bad. It gives me a headache.

How can you have the courage to know that the male protagonist is a strong man that you can't afford to mess with? What's more, the law of the jungle is the same everywhere, so what if you bully the weak?