Anime Crossover: Building a Divine Kingdom in Type-Moon

Can the abilities be more cool, such as King's Treasure, Sun's Gift, Unlimiter, Super Adaptation, Death Eye, etc?

The current 100,000 words seems pretty good, and there are very few characters. It's just the world arrangement in the introduction, emm... How can I put it, it's not attractive at all. I've seen too many before, especially the three Naruto, Pirates, Demon Slayers, and Ghouls. The world is hard to collapse. Let's not talk about combat power. Let's accept the woman in it. She has eaten people, and some people are jealous of her. If she doesn't, she will be scolded.

It might as well be called the Spear that Breaks the Dawn at the Beginning. This Spear that Eternally Shines at the Beginning looks too awkward. Breaking of dawn and shining go well together. One is that when the sun is still alive, it brings dawn to the world, the light that cuts through the night drives away the darkness, and the light of hope shines on the earth. One is that when the sun dies, it brings dusk to the world, the light announcing the end shines on the world, and the light of despair covers the sky.

The division of power is really strange. How come the next level of the galaxy jumps to the single universe? The span between the galaxy and the universe shouldn't be too big, right?

Meili's swearing every day is a bit affecting her senses.

If you have more than a grain of rice, you should be considered a good person. In Feilu's current environment, it can be regarded as money found in shit. Come on, author!!!

Cut it off, 300 in more than half a month, I originally wanted to continue writing, but the website disliked me hahaha

Fei Lu is now a rare novel that I can read, so good luck to the author!

Who is this, reincarnated from the dirty soil?

Can the update speed of a bastard like you keep up with the speed of my paying for a subscription? Miscellaneous fish author