American Comics: Succubus Sect Master, Gwen Throws Herself into My Arms from the Start
美漫：魅魔宗主，开局格温投怀
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 660k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
170Chapters
1.2MReads
3.6kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 19
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Soul piercing, or indigenous soul piercing... It's hard to say
The poisonous point of the first chapter at the beginning is soul penetration. The male protagonist is a native of the world of immortality. He doesn't know the plot, so the sense of immersion is directly reduced at the beginning.
At the beginning, a soul-piercing talent will appear
Just this little trick played by the male protagonist scared Black Widow and Nick Fury? With their urinary nature, it will arouse their interest. Just write according to the plot, don't make up things other than the story.
The writing is quite good, but it always seems like a conspiracy theory, which makes me feel uncomfortable.
The subject matter is okay, but I still pretend to do it! Can OAA come up and slap you to death? So, who are you showing that bastard-like look?! Return the chess pieces? Still dismissive of SHIELD? Wouldn't it be better to have more warm daily routines, make more friends, write more funny stories, and have more ambiguous heroines in the plot?!
The author should not write about things other than the plot, it is better to follow the plot. After all, your storytelling ability is a bit poor. Are you describing a smart and capable Black Widow? His writing ability is inferior to that of an average police officer.
Isn't it the author? You should read it yourself after you finish writing it. The first chapter of more than 100 chapters about the dual cultivation of Heqin has already broken through to the state of becoming a god. A few chapters later, it is written that one needs to consolidate one's own strength to break through to become a god. It's not about you whether you have achieved a breakthrough or not. You should check it yourself after you finish writing.
Do you accept all the female protagonists and female supporting characters? Author
Has the author read I Am the Evil Emperor? There is a Peach Blossom Sword Finger in it that is very suitable for the protagonist. You can arrange it.