Great Qin: Starting as the Mohist Leader, Supreme Among the Hundred Schools

Look, they say they are from Loli Island. When are you going to come out? Don't make false propaganda, otherwise a few small accounts will get all the evaluation votes for you.

The capital described in the first three chapters is already qualified to dominate the world. A mere Mohist giant doesn't matter, why not establish his own family and call himself a saint? Either pursue immortality and freedom, or strive for world hegemony. Choosing to be a Mohist giant is really a bad idea.

Chapter 29: The killer in the snare wears bronze. Isn't that too arrogant for a killer? The bronzeware worn by others is not the color of weathered bronze. It's the same color as gold and is so bright. Isn't it too arrogant for a killer to wear?

It's so long-winded, it gives the impression that you don't know what to write, so I'm just trying to make up the number of words.

A bit long-winded! In Qin Dynasty, it can be compared to high martial arts or low fantasy, but the martial arts realm is written at the same level as fantasy, so martial arts should not be too broad-minded.

Everything else is fine, but it's too sticky and verbose.

Interesting? Martial arts version of Loli Island! Hahaha

There are no girls. Not so good

Mohist, are you the Mohist giant? There are three schools of Mohism: Qi, Chu and Qin

Apart from feeling a bit verbose, the writing is okay.