The Unworthy in Late Tang: From the Start, I Summoned Luowang to Rebuild the Great Tang

This book probably won't be a hit

It's too long-winded. The previous one was pretty good, but the Shannan war has been ruined for so many chapters. Why is it so popular? Don't you know the rhythm?

No, how many pages do you need to write for a general? If you continue writing, how long will it take for the war to end?

It's too slow, does it take so many chapters to fight a war, and the protagonist is only nine years old, how long will it take to get to the beginning of the original plot, and it will be too embarrassing if the protagonist's territory is not as big as Li Siyuan and Li Maozhen many years later, and Emperor Taizong of the Tang Dynasty unified the country in seven years. The protagonist is now nine years old, seven years old, seventeen years old, and 16 years old. Li Xingyun was 17 years old at the beginning of the original plot. If the protagonist is the same age as Li Xingyun, then add one year to the protagonist and unify the country in eight years. He ascends the throne and proclaims himself emperor at the age of 17. In history, Taizong unified the country in seven years. Then the protagonist knows the future direction. There is also a system that sends abilities and resources to civil servants and generals. If the protagonist has not unified the Central Plains in seven or eight years, then this system is too incompetent.

It's both slow and slow. If you don't rush to the street, who will? Go and see if others are worse than you.

As a surrendered minister, your writing is worse than that of Yuan Tiangang. It is like a deserted land among thousands of troops, right? You can't take down two top killers at the top level, right? It took six Sword Slaves of the Great Celestial Rank to work together to defeat the surrender. Even the three kings might not be able to defeat you, the surrendered minister. Isn't Yinggou, the most powerful among the Corpse Ancestors, capable of killing him instantly with the Great Celestial Rank?

Alas* the author treats people as fools

The most annoying thing is that there is no reasonable explanation for summoning the famous generals of the previous dynasty in the later generations. No one knows the people of the previous dynasty, and they can only accept it with surprise.

The progress is too slow. Do we need to write so many chapters for a war? Want to mix chapters?

Hurry up and update. Other books started with five chapters a day, but it was reduced to three chapters a day after it was put on the shelf. However, the number of words in each chapter is much more than before. You are so good. This book is wilting at the beginning, one chapter a day.