Anime Crossover: I Can Transmigrate Without Limit

80% Of the current Yukinoshita Yukino in my fanfic I want to slap her in the face and tell her to see what you can do

All we can say is that in current novels, the addition of the service department and the light-sounding department that lacks people, but the other party still dislikes them, are poisonous points. And the protagonist who has no temper is also a poisonous point now.

I feel like the ones before the service department were okay, but the one who got to the service department was a weak and easy to bully protagonist. Yukinoshita Yukino in it was too cheap, she should have been slapped.

The most popular protagonist in Feilu was able to escape with his life after being beaten by two Yonko. The other one either took advantage of it or killed him instantly and became stronger. It was not revenge.

In the service department, the male protagonist has no temper and fights with powerful enemies to the extreme until he is injured. Even writing comics about migrant workers is a bit old-fashioned. I feel like the author hasn't read novels here for a while?

In terms of combat power, the pirate was chased and beaten by two Yonko; in terms of intelligence, he was cheated by the Hokage and Jue; in terms of morality, he accepted the girl but did not reveal any information to make people prepare in advance.

Both your plot and the character's personality and strength are problematic. 1. What you write about Yukino is like Kasumigaoka. Yukino is cold and not very caring about others. Unless she is offended, she will not be venomous. After all, she is a eldest lady with a tutor. 2. The light music club didn't have enough people at that time and was about to be abolished. Regardless of whether you were a boy or a girl, they would hug their thighs and beg you to join. They were basically carefree and kind-hearted girls, and they would not hesitate just because they were boys. 3. The demon you describe is very similar to the one used by Hyoudou to train Hyoudou in the original novel. Akeno was at least an intermediate demon at that time. Even if his combat power was reduced, he could be evenly matched with that training demon and could be seriously injured. This is really an exaggeration. 4. Your protagonist was criticized for no apparent reason, and in the end he was kidnapped by Yukino and taken back to the service department without saying anything. You are too soft and you are going to die in the waste furnace.

With this plot development... I don't understand why you join the service department? The protagonist just needs to join the club, and it's not like being tied to the service club. You might as well send the protagonist to the light music club. When I saw Yukino taking the application form with a condescending tone, I was speechless, and even gave her the order to join the protagonist. I don't understand why the protagonist is made so weak in the dialogue? And what you, Mio Akiyama of the light music department, wrote isn't quite right, right? How could the three of us dislike the gender of the protagonist when we are in the light music club? If you describe her as shy, I have nothing to say, but at this time, the light music club is in danger of being abolished, right? Aren't you rushing to recruit people? Dai Wei can only castanets and everyone is rushing to recruit them. Who cares what you do at this time?

The subject matter is good and the ideas are okay, but the writing style is too immature and the emotional description is very poor. The protagonist has no opinion and is too twisted. Moreover, it feels like it is written just for the sake of writing. There are problems with the emotional logic.

After pirates comes Naruto? Doesn't the author know that writing two comics about three major migrant workers in one novel is no longer popular? And you still write it continuously? Could it be Death next?