Comprehensive Comic Group Chat: at the Beginning, Ellie Recognizes Her Father

I have thirty-six revisions and seventy-two revisions here. You have to learn like that

In order to create a proud image of Esdeath, they suppressed the male protagonist and made him a pet. The key point is that the male protagonist has no means to refute, and the image of a weak and passive man is created. If you can't write, don't write it.

The emotional scenes are so awkward, they are just trying to gain popularity, they just waste money, and they have no real skills.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I've seen the blowing breathing method, and this is the first time I've seen you blowing like this.

Create two of your own. Once you break through, you will reach the top. Once you break through, you will reach the peak. Once you reach the top, you will break through.

The author is a fool and has no common sense. It is already obvious at five months, and the baby has been raised for a long time. Are you? Is your wife still jumping around outside at five months?

This plot is very novel, but it's a pity that all the tickets have been given out. From now on, they are all reserved for you, come on

Why is there a live broadcast? It took a lot of effort for someone to write about the bug in Ghost Rider. Alas.

How could the grandson be crowned a prince? Even if he is canonized, he is still a grandson. The grandson also needs to be canonized. How could anyone immediately say that his great-grandson is here? He has not been canonized, nor has he been crowned king. He can only be called the grandson of the emperor. Writing a book requires some basic common sense.

This is more or less the same, at least it's not aggrieved

Please update it quickly, your word count looks embarrassing.

So far it looks pretty good, just a little lacking, please update soon! ! !

Ryouko Kusakabe's last name is Kusakabe, not Kusaka

How about a Saiyan-Kryptonian hybrid?

This novel reminds me of those three little boys

Personally, I feel like my daily life is a little better. I feel so tired from running around all the time.

Haha, author, your second cover will not last as long as your first cover, hahaha.

Why is this picture so blurry?

63 Flowers and 11 comments for you, keep writing.

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